I put his one in the category fill-in chapter. Don't get me wrong it's a nice chapter and it's good to see Natalia making new friends and finding a place to stay, but If there's no Olivia/Natalia interaction it's not a real chapter :P The flashback to the waking up with Olivia and Emma was really cute. I wonder when Emma is going to ask question about Her mom and Natalia. Olivia and Em shopping ... sounds like a good day for the local shops :P
yeah, yeah, I know clingy = doom relationship, but it's fiction so clingy doesn't have to mean doom relationship ;-) But you're right I don't too clingy myself, need my freedom from time to time. Still you write those two so amazingly that I can't get enough of them together.
And me demanding ... oh no, no I'm open for everything you put those two through and if you keep them apart I'll suffer but I'll survive ... somehow :P
the best fiction is non-fiction. and I think clingy is bad, fiction or not, ha! I like 'em together too though, their scenes are the easiest for me to write :) but the story needs to go on and there're bigger things than them, unfortunately! ;p
It's so cool that you are drawing them "real". The sleepy kiss pass along and the fact that Natalia needs "alone time" with a book makes this already wonderful fic even more perfect. They are far from on an easy path, there are huge bumps to come (you evil author), but I love the evolution of their relationship.....AND everybody needs a guygayfriend. That's where the truth comes right at'cha, on so many levels. I only fret about one thing. If Natalia works the bar, what is Olivia going to do until 2 in the morning, when she gets home? Nope, she needs to come home to Natalia's cooking and warm embrace, and someone has to help Jellybean with her homework.
I only fret about one thing. If Natalia works the bar, what is Olivia going to do until 2 in the morning, when she gets home? oh, good point. argh! HA..!
Glad you appreciate the *little things I put in the fic :)
So I will say it again........another great chapter. Although I love, love, love when you write Olivia/Natalia together giving them some "alone" time makes it so real. (if that makes any sense) Love how you wrote the sleepy kiss pass....love it!
~ the way Olivia's eyes had met hers the moment before Olivia had lifted her face to receive the kiss on her lips.
As I have said before the way you put words together is so real! Love your writing lady! So completely hooked on it!!
Fairy godmother indeed! So glad that Natalia is making friends...but hope that there are Natalia/Olivia scenes coming in the next update(fingers crossed ;) )!
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The flashback to the waking up with Olivia and Emma was really cute. I wonder when Emma is going to ask question about Her mom and Natalia.
Olivia and Em shopping ... sounds like a good day for the local shops :P
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And me demanding ... oh no, no I'm open for everything you put those two through and if you keep them apart I'll suffer but I'll survive ... somehow :P
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don't worry, I won't let you suffer, lanie!
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oh, good point. argh! HA..!
Glad you appreciate the *little things I put in the fic :)
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Love how you wrote the sleepy kiss pass....love it!
~ the way Olivia's eyes had met hers the moment before Olivia had lifted her face to receive the kiss on her lips.
As I have said before the way you put words together is so real! Love your writing lady! So completely hooked on it!!
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Loving the story so please keep writing!
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cheers! I'll update soon I hope
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