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Devil Ride 27/?

Nov 29, 2010 21:19

Title: Devil Ride ( Read more... )

Comments 17

bsofthewest November 29 2010, 14:09:53 UTC

That was the sexiest walk across a room I have ever read!
and
"found a spot, and... well, for the lack of a better word, perved." PERFECT

xenalvr November 29 2010, 14:36:43 UTC

I actually preferred the walk in Bad Things buuuut this wasn't too bad *grin

bsofthewest November 29 2010, 14:55:44 UTC

I just re-read that...yes, I believe we have a tie!

laniecroft November 29 2010, 16:12:47 UTC

Have to say this is one of the best chapters so far. Despite nothing huge happened - just a girl walking in a club to meet her date - yet it's so ... I don't know ... so personal, Natalias thoughts, feelings and emotions are so real and believable.
The rollercoaster metaphor for her emotions is perfect. Olivia's girlfriend ... niceee :D

And THE walk ... oh my ... geez ... sexy as hell.

anonymous November 29 2010, 16:39:02 UTC

WOW!!!! That was some walk!! I need a cold shower.
Where do i find Bad things? Please? I really need to compare.
Thanks for the great story, can't wait for more.

xenalvr November 30 2010, 12:09:48 UTC

This is the link to all the chapters: http://community.livejournal.com/passion_perfect/2608151.html

cheers for reading!

psychomonkey_29 November 30 2010, 00:27:23 UTC

Was not fond of rollarcoasters but the way Natalia describes it maybe give them another chance...and if Olivia is along for the ride.

Love the steady stream of updates and can't wait for more!

xenalvr November 30 2010, 12:10:21 UTC

awesome :) rollercoasters are awesome and exhilarating and heaps of fun, I reckon :)

ttandme69 November 30 2010, 01:20:43 UTC

omg...just read the last 13 chapters...I am so loving this story! Glad to see N&O out together! WTF is Mallet up to??? Interesting point there! Where is Franktard up to...he has not mad an appearance! Yay Doris! I cannot wait to see how Greg reacts to O introducing N as her g/f! thanks for the hard work and for posting and sharing this story...Lisa

xenalvr November 30 2010, 12:21:28 UTC

heya! hm, why's everyone expecting to see Frank? I really have no wish to write him into my fic...

cheers for reading! glad you're enjoying the ride so far!

ttandme69 December 2 2010, 03:03:44 UTC

I do not want to see Frank for sure...if you do not put him in that is great for me...thanks for posting, Lisa

xenalvr December 2 2010, 03:11:26 UTC

YEAH, that's what I'm talkin' about! for me, he's completely redundant.