Devil Ride 17/?

[xenalvr]

Title: Devil Ride
Author: xenalvrFandom: Guiding Light

Comments

[bsofthewest]

I'm waiting for something terrible to happen...I am a worry-wort. I prefer happy, sexy and loving otalia, but the fates are not always kind to these two.
Please, Goddess of all things, let them be happy together!

[ndasky1]

Hope you had a good time at the wedding.

Olivia, you should go with that feeling and kiss Natalia. :o)

I'm curious to see Rafe's reaction to Natalia being in Springfield. I love the story so far.

[laniecroft]

I say, go for the kiss Olivia.

It's awesome how physical close they were at the beginning of the story and now how you changed the physical closeness into a more deep more emotional closeness. As much as I hate the idea of Natalia moving in her own suite/flat/room it makes perfect sense.
I really wonder where their journey is taking them. I really hope for tem being together, but somehow I have a feeling you'll come up with some obsticals for them.
Still they are cute together and I like how they support each other.

[jennjenn30]

For this to be an AU story, which I typically don't care for, you have me loving this story so much more than some of the other 'on the path' Otalia story lines. The connection that they share is written so well that it can be literally felt. As I've told you before, this is truly a pleasure to read..:-), and I mean it each and every time.

[bsofthewest]

You let your brother's wedding come before more writing? I just don't understand you. Oh, you mean there is life beyond fic? I don't think so. I've spent quite a long time re-reading this and I am not yet half way through....not that I am complaining.