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Devil Ride 9/?

Oct 26, 2010 23:17

Title: Devil Ride
Author: xenalvrFandom: Guiding Light ( Read more... )

Comments 18

laniecroft October 26 2010, 16:12:42 UTC

This chapter felt like one ice cold shower.
And I'm so not gonna tell you that I screamed "NO" while reading this chapter.

I can't believe Natalia did go and that Olivia let her. I really hope they meet again pretty soon.

xenalvr October 26 2010, 16:30:53 UTC

ha! aww... :) it's just not realistic any other way. I don't really like the whole knight in shining armour thing... I mean, I do, but the princess has gotta be able to save the knight right back, if you know what I mean. So they have to be on equal standing, and that cannot happen unless they go their separate ways... for a time.

laniecroft October 26 2010, 16:41:58 UTC

Yah, I know what you mean ... now I'm wondering who's gonna be the princess and who the knight and who is saving who :-)
Anyway, awesome story.

xenalvr October 26 2010, 16:44:54 UTC

and in answer to your (rhetorical) question: yay for same-sex relationships because dang, we're versatile, and that's why it's so fun. If I wanted, I could be the princess pretending to be a knight, pretending to be the princess... just to confuse the hell outta you.

HA!

I' m glad you're liking the fic :) it's a lot more challenging to write than Bad Things!

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jennjenn30 October 26 2010, 20:15:12 UTC

I so wish Olivia had caught up with Natalia. I can't wait to see how they cross paths again..:-)

xenalvr October 27 2010, 02:17:27 UTC

ah but that wouldn't be fun at all :)

korenap October 26 2010, 20:32:35 UTC

Well I assume thoughts will linger and Natalia will be approached by the nemesis or his minions. Agree with you about the whole knight in shinning armor thing. Can't wait to see where they go from here.

xenalvr October 27 2010, 02:18:32 UTC

your observations always sound so effortless...

psychomonkey_29 October 27 2010, 01:25:59 UTC

Had the same feeling as laniecroft at the end of the chapter. Was screaming what the frack! But I do love that when they do meet again (please say they meet again soon!) maybe it will be because they want and need to and not because they have to( but that works to).

Love the story and please keep writing.

xenalvr October 27 2010, 02:15:07 UTC

okay, I do have to warn you that it's gonna get worse before it gets better. :/ that said, I am so pleased at both your reactions. Goal accomplished :)

ttandme69 October 27 2010, 02:39:58 UTC

just caught up on this one...oh, this is getting good! will O find N... who is stalking O??? eagerly awaiting the next chapter, thanks, Lisa

xenalvr October 27 2010, 03:58:17 UTC

thanks, Lisa! more will be up soon :)