Missed the Mark~Chapter 1
Warnings: Freaky looking people.
All was quiet in Abendroth Manor. Nobody had suspected a thing...
The five people, if you could call them people, just walked right through. The intruder alarm hadn't sounded. Maybe they shut if off?
But, no matter, the five had walked straight in, and attacked him. The blond one with the pointy nose bloodied him up bad. The blond guy threw him on the table as everyone else sat down around him. They talked at the weather first. Strange...but soon in went into the punishment for "Hans Abendroth".
Hans looked around at the people sitting at his table.
He saw a tanned girl with blond hair and lots of make-up on. She looked like a whore...but maybe she was. Wait....didn't he know her from somewhere? Didn't she cook his meals? It was Daisy Jones! What was she doing!?
But, Hans kept looking.
He saw the man that beat him up. He had a long nose and his whole outfit consisted of leather.
Then he saw a man with a black "ninja-mask" on. His skin was a green-ish, yellow-ish color (from what little he could see). His eyes were purple...? He also had a large red "X" shaped scar on his nose.
Hans moved his gaze to another man. He was very frightening. He was bald, had a large goatee, lots of wrinkles, pale-as-a-ghost skin, and also a large "X" scar on his nose.
Then, Hans saw her. She was the scariest.
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Eventually the conversation died down about Hans' punishment. Suddenly, she spoke.
"I'd like to talk to Herr Abendroth alone, please."
"Dear," the bald man replied."I don't think so. Your-" But he was cut off.
"Alec, I can handle it. Nothing will happen. Timmy made him weak enough."
"Alright then, Judith. Do your worst."
Judith nodded.
The other four got up and left the room.
We were silent for a while. Then Judith spoke.
"Did you know I was once quite beautiful? Along with my husband. Alec Alec. I can't get over how funny his name is. But, Maxwell, was also very handsome. You know why we look like this, don't you?" She got up and pushed some chairs away. "It's because of you."
She punched Hans hard in the chest and he went flying off the table and on the ground.
"Ha!" She laughed once.
Hans picked himself up and dusted off his pants.
He groaned. His whole body hadn't been that sore since...well it hadn't!
Judith walked on over to Hans and removed her large black hat. Hans dropped his mouth in horror. Her face was horrible!
Her eyes were beady and brown. She had blotches of white around her face. Blood was coming out from her lip and it stayed there. Her side looked burned and had scars on it. She too had the large "X" scar. Was it some sort of cult symbol?
"Yes, however, after you're nuclear power plant exploded, Maxwell, Alec, and myself suffered a great deal. We were all in pain. The doctors did everything to save our faces. But, nothing. Maxwell's skin started to rot and turn green. My husband turned pale and his eyes turned a frightening red. As for me, well...you can see. My eyes were only a deep blue, and now they're brown and disgusting. My face had been burned. And the blood that had been coming out of my mouth, 'attached' itself to my face. As stupid as it sounds. But, anyway. You, Herr Abendroth, have killed thousands of people with your negligence and have injured even more. You'll now pay. We decided your punishment. You will be shot tonight. Any last words?" Judith finished.
"The explosion wasn't my fault. I did nothing." He said.
"Awww...how sad. Your last words are lies!? You disgusting-!" She punched him in the stomach before she finished her sentence.
He fell to his feet, but got up right away.
"I'll send in Timmy. He has his prized gun in our car. Auf wiedersein, Herr Hans Abendroth. You have failed us. You have not finished your weapon. I am disappointed." Judith walked out. Never looking back.
"Timmy, go kill him." Judith whispered, as she kissed her husband. Timmy nodded.
A few moments he returned, carrying a large gun. He walked into the dining room where Hans was. His face was still showed signs of surprise.
"Wait, no, let me ex-" Hans started, but was cut off by the gun.
"Too late." Timmy said. He chuckled and stood back. He heard his wife coming in the room.
"Oh, Daisy, I'm soooooo sad that he's dead. How will I carry on!?" his voice heavy with sarcasm.
Blood started to pour out from the wound. Timmy knelt down and jammed his fingers into the wound. After 30 seconds of poking and prodding Hans, his hand emerged with the tiny bullet.
"Goodness, that's disgusting, Timmy! But, I'm so turned on right now!" Daisy said.
"Guys, quick, we gotta scram. The suns is coming up!" Maxwell yelled at them.
They all ran out of the house as the sun came up. When they were all together, everyone started to cackle and ran off again.
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Woot! New story! Pretty new characters! Well, they're not so pretty. But anyway. I've had this idea to do a murder story for a while. So I finally started. I spent a lot of time making Word documents about all the characters.
It's really short because I was too lazy and I was getting a headache from playing sims so much. :P Ah well. Comment and tell me what ya' think! :D
Cheers!
All was quiet in Abendroth Manor. Nobody had suspected a thing...
The five people, if you could call them people, just walked right through. The intruder alarm hadn't sounded. Maybe they shut if off?
But, no matter, the five had walked straight in, and attacked him. The blond one with the pointy nose bloodied him up bad. The blond guy threw him on the table as everyone else sat down around him. They talked at the weather first. Strange...but soon in went into the punishment for "Hans Abendroth".
Hans looked around at the people sitting at his table.
He saw a tanned girl with blond hair and lots of make-up on. She looked like a whore...but maybe she was. Wait....didn't he know her from somewhere? Didn't she cook his meals? It was Daisy Jones! What was she doing!?
But, Hans kept looking.
He saw the man that beat him up. He had a long nose and his whole outfit consisted of leather.
Then he saw a man with a black "ninja-mask" on. His skin was a green-ish, yellow-ish color (from what little he could see). His eyes were purple...? He also had a large red "X" shaped scar on his nose.
Hans moved his gaze to another man. He was very frightening. He was bald, had a large goatee, lots of wrinkles, pale-as-a-ghost skin, and also a large "X" scar on his nose.
Then, Hans saw her. She was the scariest.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Eventually the conversation died down about Hans' punishment. Suddenly, she spoke.
"I'd like to talk to Herr Abendroth alone, please."
"Dear," the bald man replied."I don't think so. Your-" But he was cut off.
"Alec, I can handle it. Nothing will happen. Timmy made him weak enough."
"Alright then, Judith. Do your worst."
Judith nodded.
The other four got up and left the room.
We were silent for a while. Then Judith spoke.
"Did you know I was once quite beautiful? Along with my husband. Alec Alec. I can't get over how funny his name is. But, Maxwell, was also very handsome. You know why we look like this, don't you?" She got up and pushed some chairs away. "It's because of you."
She punched Hans hard in the chest and he went flying off the table and on the ground.
"Ha!" She laughed once.
Hans picked himself up and dusted off his pants.
He groaned. His whole body hadn't been that sore since...well it hadn't!
Judith walked on over to Hans and removed her large black hat. Hans dropped his mouth in horror. Her face was horrible!
Her eyes were beady and brown. She had blotches of white around her face. Blood was coming out from her lip and it stayed there. Her side looked burned and had scars on it. She too had the large "X" scar. Was it some sort of cult symbol?
"Yes, however, after you're nuclear power plant exploded, Maxwell, Alec, and myself suffered a great deal. We were all in pain. The doctors did everything to save our faces. But, nothing. Maxwell's skin started to rot and turn green. My husband turned pale and his eyes turned a frightening red. As for me, well...you can see. My eyes were only a deep blue, and now they're brown and disgusting. My face had been burned. And the blood that had been coming out of my mouth, 'attached' itself to my face. As stupid as it sounds. But, anyway. You, Herr Abendroth, have killed thousands of people with your negligence and have injured even more. You'll now pay. We decided your punishment. You will be shot tonight. Any last words?" Judith finished.
"The explosion wasn't my fault. I did nothing." He said.
"Awww...how sad. Your last words are lies!? You disgusting-!" She punched him in the stomach before she finished her sentence.
He fell to his feet, but got up right away.
"I'll send in Timmy. He has his prized gun in our car. Auf wiedersein, Herr Hans Abendroth. You have failed us. You have not finished your weapon. I am disappointed." Judith walked out. Never looking back.
"Timmy, go kill him." Judith whispered, as she kissed her husband. Timmy nodded.
A few moments he returned, carrying a large gun. He walked into the dining room where Hans was. His face was still showed signs of surprise.
"Wait, no, let me ex-" Hans started, but was cut off by the gun.
"Too late." Timmy said. He chuckled and stood back. He heard his wife coming in the room.
"Oh, Daisy, I'm soooooo sad that he's dead. How will I carry on!?" his voice heavy with sarcasm.
Blood started to pour out from the wound. Timmy knelt down and jammed his fingers into the wound. After 30 seconds of poking and prodding Hans, his hand emerged with the tiny bullet.
"Goodness, that's disgusting, Timmy! But, I'm so turned on right now!" Daisy said.
"Guys, quick, we gotta scram. The suns is coming up!" Maxwell yelled at them.
They all ran out of the house as the sun came up. When they were all together, everyone started to cackle and ran off again.
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Woot! New story! Pretty new characters! Well, they're not so pretty. But anyway. I've had this idea to do a murder story for a while. So I finally started. I spent a lot of time making Word documents about all the characters.
It's really short because I was too lazy and I was getting a headache from playing sims so much. :P Ah well. Comment and tell me what ya' think! :D
Cheers!