§13 [The Wave Of Love] I

Feb 15, 2012 20:30


Title: PART 1 [If I knew then, what I know now...]
Collection: Heat of Hawaii
Author: xcsimisiax
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Characters/Pairings: Steve/Danny {but other characters regularly appear}
Summary: "God, give me a mercy!" {Steve 2 Danny}
Content of Note: Drama & erotic,
Warinings: Hmmm english isn't my mother language, so remember about this, okay? lol
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fic: steve/danno, rating: r, fiction: slash, heat of hawaii

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I'm so in love <3 montanamonroex February 15 2012, 22:08:16 UTC
Okay, first of all, I think I'll gonna need finding the appropriate words. Disappointing me? Never, not even a tiny chance ♥
This was so incredibley sweet ♥ Besides SEALy? Aaaawwww ♥ I wiped away a couple of tears ♥
It's always amazing how much they care of each other ♥ The way Danny is taking care of Steve, when he feels like shit ♥ Love is radiating from them ♥ From these small touches, touching each other's faces, snuggling up together on the couch ♥ That's so damn sweet ♥
This part really melts my heart, Babe ♥ It's amazing how these two making me smile and my lil heart is beating like crazy all the time ♥ Gosh, much I love these two ♥ This part is really made my evening, Babe ♥ Sweet, cute, full of love ♥ I love it to the beat ♥ I really do ♥

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montanamonroex February 15 2012, 22:08:49 UTC
Wow. I don't know how you are doing it, Babe. But you grabbed the mood change perfectly. One minute, they are snuggling on the couch, getting ready to have some fun, the next mintue Steve is worried about Gracie and then he's furious Danny lieing to him for such a long time. Amazing. Besides I love how worried he's about Gracie. Danny just mentioned that they need to talk and the first thing he's thinking about is that something is wrong with Gracie. Too adorable ( ... )

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montanamonroex February 15 2012, 22:09:15 UTC
Awwwwwwww ♥ How much I love this early McValentine's day present ♥
I love the fact that even Danny knew that he hurted Steve, he didn't step back, he has to tell him that it wasn't his call to tell him the truth about Joe. It would hurt Steve more if Danny would say "Hey, I know Joe is father. Deal with the situation."
Steve needed to hear this from Joe. He needed to hear the truth from his mouth. Only Joe could tell him why he did, what he did.
It's so beautiful to see how much they need each other. Even though Steve is mad at Danny, he lets him to hold him, to snuggle to him. He needs his closeness. He wants to be alone to process what he heard, but at the same time he's longing for Danny. He's longing to feel his body next to his, his touches, his warms hands, his kisses. It's amazing how much they love and need each other ♥
As Steve is realising that Danny's right his body language is changing. It's amazing. He's relaxing into Danny's body. He knows that Danny is telling him the truth ♥

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montanamonroex February 15 2012, 22:10:00 UTC
As you see it, sis, I needed a couple of minutes to calm myself down :D I mean, how on earth can you stop the story there? How? :D:D:D:D ( ... )

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montanamonroex February 15 2012, 22:11:14 UTC
I'll need water or shower? :) No, I don't think so, my tears were enough. :D And it can't be just a coincidence, that the minute I finished reading, came the song Could I have this kiss forever. Now could you blame me? The hopeless romantic, bursting into tears ( ... )

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