Comments | xari_xryso_fic: Fic: Incentive: MCR, Pairing: Frank/Gerard

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Fic: Incentive: MCR, Pairing: Frank/Gerard

Mar 01, 2011 03:32

Title: Incentive
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Mentions of sex, contrivedness
Word Count: ~1500ish
Disclaimer: I am in no way affiliated with any of the people mentioned, and everything you read here is a filthy, filthy lie.
Summary: Gerard's sleeping habits are crap, and Frank desperately wants a good night's sleep. Clearly, some positive reinforcement ( Read more... )

fic length: oneshot, fandom: band: mcr, fanfiction, !author: xaritomene, rating: pg-13, genre: humour, genre: romance, genre: fluff

Comments 18

jedusaur March 1 2011, 04:06:20 UTC

“S’the point,” Gerard agreed, a thread of earnestness trying valiantly to make itself heard in his voice. “Dream diary of an insomniac.”

Love that line.

xaritomene March 3 2011, 12:49:50 UTC

*g* Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

ashling_lily March 1 2011, 04:19:43 UTC

This is brilliant! \0/ Dream Diary of an Insomniac! That's pure artist genius right there! *hands you a badge saying 'Honouary Artist'*

And I'm really sorry that I disappeared! *hugs* the bus was coming and I was trying to get stuff done :( forgive me?

xaritomene March 3 2011, 12:52:08 UTC

*bows and pins on the badge* I have a BADGE. :D \0/

I'm glad you liked it, darlin', and seriously, no worries; RL always trumps fannish stuff. Did you get it all done in the end? (And don't be silly, lovey, there's nothing TO forgive!)

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xaritomene March 3 2011, 12:54:00 UTC

That's awesome, I'm so glad you liked it despite not being in the fandom! Thanks for taking a chance on it! \0/

draconic_girl March 1 2011, 14:59:20 UTC

yeaaah, uhm... I guess I need to take a nap because I totally recognized myself in that last part with Gerard. So this was a very accurate portrayal of us who have problems with sleeping patterns, well the lack thereof... And poor Frank, at least I don't keep anyone up with my bad habits.

Hih, and this was totally my favourite part:
Gerard might be a fucking genius in some areas, but if Frank tried to talk around the subject and be all coy about it, they’d end up chatting about it for hours and then Gerard would go off and - write fucking poetry with sex-metaphors designed to highlight the frailty of the human existence, or some shit like that. So. Directness was key.

Good story :)
'B

xaritomene March 3 2011, 12:58:57 UTC

*laughs* Crappy sleep patterns are something I have a bit of familiarity with; I'm glad it rang true for you! (though, y'know, it obviously sucks that your sleep patterns are off. D:) I tried to make it at least a little bit real, though, so it's a relief to be backed up on that! ^_^

*g* I had fun with that bit. :D I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for reading!

neon_footprint March 1 2011, 20:58:16 UTC

So many favourite parts, seriously *so* many.

The circumlocutious poetry with sex metaphors, the bordering on psychotic bluntness, the compulsive need to write after sex (especially awesome sex), the falling asleep on sofas at inappropriate times that should be infuriating but is really rather endearing, the cuddling, the awesomeness.

But darling, dream diary of an insomniac? Can I put that in my scrapbook please? I swear I'll let you have power of veto over anything that comes from it, but it's too precious to get lost.

You. I ♥ you. That is all.

xaritomene March 3 2011, 13:42:17 UTC

*g* I did have fun writing this, even if it was a bit of a last-minute job, so I'm really glad you liked it and it worked!

And feel free to nab it! People seem to have liked it, which I glad of if a little confused by. :D I hope it provides inspiration at some point in the future and when you're a famous author I can point at it and go "I helped with that one! me! *twirls*"

♥