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[xanthral]

Well it has been like 8 months since i have used this thing. I still read it when i have time, but time is scarce these days... So i ask myself, why post now? the answer is simple really, i have been doing a lack of writing these days and with my new english major i need to write as much as i possibly can. I write in my journal still, and i type at

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[brighteyes_soul]

first and foremost-glad you're back..i understand the writing for reading yourself, and maybe capturing an audience. it's an odd sense of pressure.
i re read the poem like six times, and i tried to find something i would change to make the poem better, but i can't find a thing.
the end of that poem gave me tingles, i wasn't expecting that brilliant of an ending, comparing human life to moths in the way that they exist. (or at least, that's what i got out of it. this could have several different meanings)
well done nate. well done.

[xanthral]

thanks cola, hope things are welll.
Over heard some things last night,
hope they are resolved...

[nicholascartier]

Very nice dude. I did the same thing. I tried looking through to find something to change. At first I was thrown off by the rhythym because you rhyme at times and don't.... but the flow is nice.

I wanna see some more.

[xanthral]

ya i did that on purpose for my own ends... i usually do..
Hope Idaho is treatin my playa well,
We talked about you last night,
and how fatty your C-walk is...
Take care

[anonymous]

You need to start writing again!

[xanthral]

ooooo Anonymous... I still wirte i just don't post... maybe i will soon...

[anonymous]

you really should.. i'm your biggest fan

provides access

[anonymous]

This is amazing, I don’t know what else to say. Perfect execution of a cool idea!