If you could grant me one wish, turn the tides.

[xanthral]

Call forth unto a discriminant existence

Comments

[reliction]

bravo.

[xanthral]

bravo?

[reliction]

yeah like "good work" or "great performance" - did i spell it wrong?

[xanthral]

ya but why was it a "great performace"?

[reliction]

because i enjoyed your writing - are you thick?! :)

[reliction]

to be more specific, you use some very strong and specifc dictionary (see ardently). there is also the theme of seperation and isolation that is explored in a number of ways (such as living in the shack instead of the house) that helps relate your feelings to your audience.

[xanthral]

thanks... that means alot

[reliction]

sorry about coming off like a prick at first - yesterday wasn't the best day i've had in a while