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I've had videos playing on Youtube for hours now, just listening to the music for the most part. A few of them, I've watched, but mostly I just wanted music playing. I'll probably have to turn the volume down if I'm still going at it in a couple hours. I heard the term 'musical exorcism' somewhere or other, and it seems to describe what happens when I feel the need to listen to music fairly well.
I've mostly been playing Freecell, but a bit ago I got bored and decided to work on stories a bit. Nothing major, just some Charmed fics. Love to hear that, right? Well I had to do initial proofreading of a story I wrote just a few days ago. It's a real tearjerker, I ended up bawling again--I cried while writing it, too. Basically, it's Piper's death that Chris mentioned happening on his fourteenth birthday.
Well, after I finished blowing my nose--always runs when I cry, very annoying, I turned to another one, that has a basic premise of 'what might have happened if Leo didn't leave right away?' I'm actually rather pleased with it, though it's stopped for the moment. But the first sentence made me laugh. I'm not sure how I missed it, but it said 'Leo stood the doorway, watching his sleeping son.' Now, let's see what's wrong with that sentence, huh? I'm usually better about that, so I haven't a clue how I missed it. Wonder if there's anything else so obviously wrong.
I've mostly been playing Freecell, but a bit ago I got bored and decided to work on stories a bit. Nothing major, just some Charmed fics. Love to hear that, right? Well I had to do initial proofreading of a story I wrote just a few days ago. It's a real tearjerker, I ended up bawling again--I cried while writing it, too. Basically, it's Piper's death that Chris mentioned happening on his fourteenth birthday.
Well, after I finished blowing my nose--always runs when I cry, very annoying, I turned to another one, that has a basic premise of 'what might have happened if Leo didn't leave right away?' I'm actually rather pleased with it, though it's stopped for the moment. But the first sentence made me laugh. I'm not sure how I missed it, but it said 'Leo stood the doorway, watching his sleeping son.' Now, let's see what's wrong with that sentence, huh? I'm usually better about that, so I haven't a clue how I missed it. Wonder if there's anything else so obviously wrong.