I know that on one ever comes here and no one will ever see these, but in case someone does randomly happen upon this place, These entries are raw un-edited parts of a book that my boyfriend and I have been writing for the last two years. It's sort of in script-format, as we roleplay our pre-planned stories out on msn. I post these here because my brothers have a tendancy to "Accidentally" wipe all the memory off of my computer and have deleted over a year's worth of book. So I'm posting back-up copies of our raw material. This is how our story looks before I go in and do all the hard work of correcting all the spelling and grammer, and putting it all into proper sentace structure, ETC. Who knows, maybe someday I'll post something finished.
This is the first posted part, and it starts in a very random place since the first half of our book is gone.
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
dante grabbed his jacket and headed for the front door duverge had gone to far this time way to far
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
(lol and i know i spelt it wrong XD)
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(where's Lucy? >.>)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
(sleeping in her room XD)
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(well then) Lucy rolled over in her sleep, a little restless tonight, seeing as how Dante had sent her to bed without a single explaination to his sour mood.
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
dante truged down the road putting on his jacket "i dont have time for this" dante jumppe don to a near by room and ran from roof to roof
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
Hearing a thud and a curse, Lucy sat upright in bed. There was no way she would be able to sleep. Maybe she could try to secretly pry some information out of him.... Or spy on him! Lucy grinned. It sounded like a good way to train to her. So she quickly scrambled out of bed and threw on some loose clothes and snuck into the hall.
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(lol but no ones home)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
(LOL)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
dante saw the mansion and picked up speed
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
(lol sorry for the quick posts but im pressed for time XD)
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(okay, sorry for taking so long...)
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(didn;t he just leave there?)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
( no hes headeding to duverges DAMN IT I CANT SPELL)
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(lol okay.... )
"Dante?" Lucy crept down the stairs, quietly calling his name.. Maybe he left?
(meanwhile) Duverger Pushed his chair back, the dim candle light in the room hurting his eyes from the headache he had. What a Nightmare tonight was. But at least he knew he had someone fairly reliable looking for His daughter. He couldn;t afford to loose her now... Not with things the way they were....
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
And he certainly didn;t want to get HIM involved, but he had no choice...
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
dante saw the window open and crawled in to the room dead silent
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(Lucy's mom dead yet? I can;t member XD)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
( no not yet dying)
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(She's not sick right now though.. is she? cause I remember Lucy left when she was healthy... Does she get sick after she leaves?)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
( at some unpredetermined point yes lol)
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(lol okay I'll just go with it)
"Are you coming to bed, Dear?" Duverger sat unstirred in his chair. with a wave of his hand he dismissed his wife, who retreated solumnly down the hall. Her health was deteriorating, and her husband knew.. but at the moment that was the least of his worries....
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
dante sat hidden in shadow in the far corner of the room with a look of disgust on his face
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
( i wasnt sure if he should speak yet or not lol )
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
"Curse this headache...." Duverger rubbed his temples, every little sound, from the wind blowing outside to the maids scurrying around in other rooms... Everything sounded like an explosion.
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
danet crept up behind him "its called guilt "
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
Duverger nearly choked on his heart as he scrambled out of his chair and tumbled to the floor. He struggled to get up, but when his weak arms and heavy bottom refused to go easily, he settled for scrambling away. "Monsieur Dante!" He shouted, grabbing at his chair to help himself up. "wh-what are you doing here? Wh-what is it you want? Have you found my Daughter already?"
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
dante grabbed him by the scruf of his jacket "here let me help you up" dante lifted him up off the ground to the point where his feet nolonger thouched the ground
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
(lol mike moment XD)
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
Duverger winced and flailed his arms to no avail. "What is the meaning of this? Monsieur I beg of you to let me down this instant!"
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(lol totally)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
dant tilted his head breifly"ok" dante push/trew him back in to his chair "hows that? are we satisfied yet?"
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
Duverger hicoughed and tried to right his rumpled clothing. He tried to swallow his fear and displeasure. "What brings you here at this hour of the night, Monsieur?"
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
"you your a disspiciable little man but you know this i mean you killed a boys father then raised the boy to believe that his fathers only friend is actually the man who killed his father not only that your wife is dtererating before your very eyes and you dont lift a finger what kind of man is that hmm?".."a disspicable one you make pond scum look pleaseing "
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
(o burn and a half)
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
Duverger sputtered but no response came. As Dante's words caught up with him his face grew red with Anger. "How DARE YOU?" he roared. "It is YOU sir, who is the despicable one! Am I not correct by saying that you, a Bastard child who lives on his own with no familial connections did indeed cause the death of said 'Best friend'? I merely showed my kind hand in raising the boy away from such...
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
unpleasantries"
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(Dante still blames himself)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
(yep)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
dantes eyes burned with hate "and to top it off your going to barter your daughters hand in marrige" dnate pushed him and the chair over "so explain to me now why i shouldnt slit your throat where you lye
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
"
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
A strangled choke escaped Duvergers lips. he had to use every ounce of his will to keep himself from crying out in fear. Duverger cleared his throat and tried to counter him. "All I have ever done is shown my kind hand and hospitality..." He continued. "When Corentin;s father died, I took him in. When He was tempted by evil, I showed him the light. My wife has the finest doctors available at (cont
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
beck and call. And Now all I wish is to get my daughter home safe and Sound! Sir, You are talking to the wrong man about guilt. I believe it is YOU that is the guilty one. I wouldn;t be surprised if you were responsible for your own parents deaths. There is something not quite right about you, 'Dante.' You don;t even know your own name! (last name) For all I know my daughter is with YOU!
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(done)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
dante gave him a swift kick to the ribs
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
Duverger doubled over in pain, Winded. "G-Guards!" he choked, the words barely a whisper.
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
dante grabed him by the throat "were not done here" dante tossed him at the door and proceeded to dive out the window and head home
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
Duverger cursed and slammed his fists on the floor. He let out a gargled hoarse yelp, as his anger bubbled within him. 'Soon Dante, Soon I will strike the final blow to your heart... Soon I will rid myself of your filthy exhistance and you will no longer be a stain on my life!"
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
(O MAI GAWD TIMELAPS)
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(huh?)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
dante walked in his front door curseing under his breathe as he threw his jacket on a near by chair
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
"Dante! There you are!" Lucrezia stood up from the chair she had been lightly napping in. "I was almost worried about you" For once her voice wasn;t nagging... In fact there was a tone of relief in her voice. "Look... I'm pretty sure that you were upset about something,so did your walk at least cheer you up a little?" She asked with a smile.
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(you gonna be able to call me tonight? T_T)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
( doubt it unless i get off right now)
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
()
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
( so ill post then get off)
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(lol okay)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
dante shot lucy a look " not now" he walked past her in a hurry and into his study dante slammed the doors behind him and flipped the desk dante fell backwards onto his back and saw aldreics diary next to his head dante stared at it
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
(o shiz)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
( when the doors slammed a rack splinterd throught the wood*)
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(lemme posstt >.>)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
(read that last bit i forgot itXD)
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(ok nevermind you call me now)
So lay down, the threat is real,When his sight goes red again. says:
ok leve it here then
I love you more than anything and I'd give away my anything just to be with you~~~~Mikey says:
(okies I'll save my next post for later)