smell of sunshine; jaeho

Apr 11, 2008 12:00

Smell of Sunshine
3,271 words; jaeho; PG-13

"Yunho." Jaejoong whispers so lowly that he knows that he probably can't be heard -- but it never hurts to hope. Maybe only Yunho can hear him. He braces himself behind the door of the closet, holding in his breath. He had been trying to sleep while Yunho had gone out ("Just have to pick up something", he ( Read more... )

p:jaejoong/yunho, *type:contest, *type:oneshot

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hamano_michiyo April 11 2008, 21:35:10 UTC
LoL I can't believe after everything it's JAE'S single you get. The irony kills me.

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x_voracity April 11 2008, 21:36:17 UTC
HUSH CHILD. 8D

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kurogoma April 12 2008, 04:16:30 UTC
oh man, started reading this and didn't know quite what to expect especially after the word gunappeared in the 2nd para.

werewolves!! woah...

this is different and quite brillant. thanks ^^

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x_voracity April 13 2008, 06:01:52 UTC
thank you! I'm glad you liked :)

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mimei April 12 2008, 04:47:07 UTC
ooo, intricate ♥ very neat read.

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x_voracity April 13 2008, 06:02:09 UTC
oolala, intricate! thank you :)

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mickey8 April 12 2008, 08:12:47 UTC
it sounds very much like the movie, 'I Am Legend'... but of course, with your own originality and uniqueness.

i love how they love. though in fear... but they most definitely don't mind dying for the other. ♥

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x_voracity April 13 2008, 06:03:09 UTC
i actually haven't watched that yet but i plan to very soon during the summer ^^

:) yess'm. thank you for commenting~

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_pockygirl April 12 2008, 10:36:49 UTC
i love how you made us only concerned of Jae's safety from the beginning

the pink mug ♥

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x_voracity April 13 2008, 06:04:21 UTC
the point of the story was the 'twist' for a contest at thornyear, so i tried ^^

aww, ^^♥. thank you for commenting~

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