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x_voracity

Fic - Autumn

Oct 13, 2007 20:21

Autumn
jaeho; G
516 words.

And you play in the autumn leaves, laugh and smiling while red, orange, and yellow fly through the air. Play, laugh, and smile. He pushes you into the pile you raked less than an hour ago, and he’s sweaty, laughing, shining against the clear autumn sun. He flops down next to you, making leaves fly into the air while doing so ( Read more... )

p:jaejoong/yunho, *type:drabble/flashfic

Comments 47

kelseypaige October 14 2007, 00:47:51 UTC

YAYZ

kelseypaige October 14 2007, 00:53:28 UTC

...................

you have been removed from my flist. sry baiz.

x_voracity October 14 2007, 00:56:23 UTC

OH NOES YOU HATES IT ;___;

kelseypaige October 14 2007, 01:22:53 UTC

THE JAEHO IS UNHAPPY. >:O

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sleepish October 14 2007, 01:32:03 UTC

♥ <-- totally broken.

so, um. if my heart wasn't bleeding i'd be able to say how beautiful & subtle your writing is and how much i love your jaejoong and the last line, but it kind of is bleeding so all i can really tell you is a;kldsjf ow. ):

x_voracity October 14 2007, 01:56:20 UTC

OH NOES. -mends♥-

thank you for not telling me ;___; -bandaids-

miramaru October 14 2007, 02:04:53 UTC

Jaejoong knew he would die? ;_______________;

x_voracity October 14 2007, 02:07:18 UTC

Mmm~ I'm not sure if he did. But don't we all know we will someday? 8D

miramaru October 23 2007, 02:35:32 UTC

8D

D8

bythehorns October 14 2007, 05:22:33 UTC

the first part is so sweet and simple.
and i love your colorful imagery. you made it easy to picture. it was kinda like a snap shot that starts to move and come to life.

but you killed the yunjae.
;____; >_> ;____;
the pen wielder has broken my heart.

x_voracity October 14 2007, 05:50:17 UTC

Aww thank you, I was hoping I wasn't getting too repetitive with the colors.

I didn't mean to ;__; that much It just happened.

clicheterms October 14 2007, 06:13:51 UTC

WHUT VORA *EMOS FOREVER*

The kimchi turns out to be too spicy. Changmin eats it anyway. Junsu pulls Jaejoong's hair. And Yoochun spends the night in bed with Midol.
&
But black is definitely not your heart. You'll keep his reds, oranges, and yellows there.
YOU SUCK D<
(translation: FIXEEEEET~ ;________________;)

<3 tiffo

x_voracity October 14 2007, 06:20:16 UTC

IDK TIFFO! -PUTS YOU IN CORNER WITH CHUN!-

(I don't know how!~ I don't know how this jaeho thing works. LOL.)

clicheterms October 14 2007, 06:22:24 UTC

*EMOS IN THE CHUN!CORNER OMG*

(DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD8)

<3 tiffo