the stars are crying (for what we could have had) (1/13)

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Title: the stars are crying (for what we could have had) (1/13)
Fandom: Merlin
Characters/Pairings: Arthur/Morgana, any and all other characters
Word Count: 5,072
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don't own any of this stuff, because if I did ArMor would be canon.
Spoilers: Vague spoilers for all of Merlin series 3
Summary: (The sequel to "you and i are

Comments

[wonderfulrose7]

yeeeehhh you have posted the sequel I'm so happy is finally here. Well let me tell you that from the beginning my heart was in pain as Arthur held hope for her to return, how he wanted her room to stay the same way it always was, I loved the part where Arthur, Merlin and the Knights are on their quest, I loved the writing it was just perfect, I felt as if I were there and the suspense to know that Morgana was behind the rescue, but I never expected that Arthur was actually going to find her. I also loved this part

"She could feel a strong arm wrapped around her waist, keeping her upright. The warmth from the hand pressing against her stomach was keeping her awake, and the scent surrounding her was causing her neurons to rapidly fire. Arthur. It was Arthur holding her. She was going to have to face him, and the idea was terrifying."

so simple yet showing her feeling for Arthur haven't changed

at the end where she found about Arthur and Gwen it totally broke my heart how Arthur decided he wanted Gwen, and Morgana in her desperation ran away, it saddens me a bit for her feelings of wanting revenge, also I'm curious how you are going to bring back Morgana to Camelot and her now intentions of revenge.
All in all wonderfully written, very exiting and intriguing beginning to what is going to be an epic story. Can't wait to see what happens next, this will be an exiting journey full of ups and downs I suppose, as I cried in the last story. sorry about my rant, hope you update soon. :) <3