5 stages of grief

Oct 31, 2012 16:46



Supernatural fanfiction

Title: 5 stages of grief
Characters: Sam, Dean, Cas
Word count: 875
Summary: Sometimes when you hit a stone you don't end up with a little scratch.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Warnings:
[Spoiler (click to open)]


characters death, suicide

Author's note: I just discovered that Livejounal don't delete unused accounts even if you've not logged in for almost 6 years! ( Read more... )

spnfic, hurt!dean, hurt!sam, deathfic

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moondropz November 2 2012, 13:09:28 UTC
You managed to convey the anger, despair, and acceptance quite well. And as much as it hurts-I have to agree with the way Dean chose to end it-together and finally at peace. I only saw a few words that needed to change but other than that well written. Thanks for this!
*Hugs*

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x_luciole November 2 2012, 16:15:53 UTC
Thank you!
I'm really glad you liked it!
It hurt me too to end it this way but i couldn't see Dean keep living without his brother...
And if you want to tell me which words don't fit I could try and change them!

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borgmama1of5 November 2 2012, 13:18:58 UTC
The tragedy of this was how ordinary the hunt was, and the shock of it going wrong was very effective.

You made me feel Dean's emotions!

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x_luciole November 2 2012, 16:19:44 UTC
Thank you! I wanted to start this with an ordinary hunt because i feel like they are superheros in the show! I love it but sometimes i'm like 'hey but any human would be dead!' when they just get up after being thrown against a wall!

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melacreature November 2 2012, 20:43:09 UTC
This was painful and completely in character. I, too, cannot see Dean living without a way to be with Sam. And dying on a hunt, no less. After facing Azazel, Lilith, Lucifer, Leviathans, Crowley, and Death himself, to die on a simple salt-n-burn is just a punch in the junk. If Cas could've brought him back, I know Dean would've laughed at Sammy until he puked! But, no... there's no coming back for Sam, finally. I must admit, I cried a bit. Not the ugly cry, but just a tear or two. Maybe three...shu-up. Thank you for sharing this awesome fic with us all.

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x_luciole November 3 2012, 21:13:47 UTC
I can't say if i'm glad or sorry that you cried but well ok i'm a little glad...
Sorry? ^^

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