The Crane Wife: Chapter 8 of 8

Apr 27, 2010 17:03

Title: The Crane Wife
Chapter: Eight: Eight
Author: x_losRating: NC-17 ( Read more... )

the crane wife, five/master, series, fanfiction

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silvermoon_06 April 27 2010, 19:58:15 UTC
Another brilliant upate and final chapter! I enjoyed this one immensely! I was so happy to see the Doctor came back and rescued the Master. I loved their confrontation in the cell, that was so intense. When the Master grabbed him by his hair, and started berating him, and kissing him, I thought, oh, now he's in trouble.

The Doctor finally admitting that he loved the Master was just so adorable, and the part with the Time Ring, taking it off the Master's finger and placing it on his own was so touching, and the Doctor's way of showing him that he meant all he'd said. Simply beautiful. :)

The interactions between Tegan and Nyassa were priceless, and Tegan noticing in her way how the two of them were together, that was just so funny. I loved when Five had his hand on the console, and the Master placed his hand over his, and that gorgeous little caress of the Master's knuckles, that was so sensual. Their sensual love making, wow, that was extremely steamy! I loved the parts with their mind play mixed in, that was just so amazing.

The end meeting with Brax was just so priceless, I loved how he called him John. He could see how happy they were together, and that just tore him apart. The fact that they wanted to start their own University and have Romana as one of the Professors was brilliant. :)

I loved the whole entire fic to bits! And I've saved it all to my favorites. Thanks so much for this, it was brilliant. :) I will be reading it from start to finish again. :)

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x_losfic April 27 2010, 23:15:30 UTC
I'm glad you really liked it! :)

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