The Crane Wife: Chapter 8 of 8

Apr 27, 2010 17:03

Title: The Crane Wife
Chapter: Eight: Eight
Author: x_losRating: NC-17 ( Read more... )

the crane wife, five/master, series, fanfiction

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aralias April 27 2010, 19:17:18 UTC
first thought first: i hope brax gets to be president after this, and strongly suspect that even in crane wife land it will never ever happen.

other things:
1. my favourite bit about this is still the ultra pandas. i don't know why, but they are just so good!
2. master's plan=v cunning.
3. dalek talk is always hilarious, and i love that they are tricked into revealing more plan! v cunning again, well done master, i like it when you do things well.
4. all th stuff about the doctor coming back and thinking, hurrah! now i can come back is much better, and it really feels as if he made the decision rather than just came back because the plot demanded it. also i love the bit with the scientists wanting to stay locked up, i think i've said that before, but i do, i love it muchly. because it's funny and it implies much that is not said about their relationship with him and with the master, and his with the master, and also the doctor not telling anyone he's engaged, but just being a dork about it. all this is excellent.
5. malt loaf is delicious.
6. nyssa loves science! i am very fond of nyssa, since listening to all her good audios.
7. good many page sex scene. particularly the weird bit with the collar, which is weird, but also i like that the master apologises for it again crazily and the doctor implies that he did kind of enjoy having his hand forced before, which makes chapter 6 less bad.
8. i like things that have superfluous amounts of braxiatel in them.
9. i long to hear a sexually appealing thought about gravity wells :P

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x_losfic April 27 2010, 21:19:40 UTC
1. You and Nadja both love you some Ultrapandas.
2. Your suggestion, behbeh.
3. *sigh* Stupid Dalek talking.
4. I'm glad that /works/,
5. You tried to edit it out twice.
6. Did not know that!
7. Ah, didn't know you thought it worked well. Excellent. And he would hardly have gone along with it if he didn't.
8. I thought he /did/ get to be President, but perhaps he doesn't. :(
9. I am thinking of some well sexy ones. With all due gravity.

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aralias April 27 2010, 21:55:28 UTC
just because it is delicious doesn't mean that malt loaf deserves its place eshrined in crane wife. i don't think i did try and edit it out the first time, i just said that nobody ate it except me.

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x_losfic April 27 2010, 22:54:14 UTC
I'd hardly call Tegan eating some an Enshrining. Mm. Malt loooaf. Behbeh, let's get some.

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