Cooks in the Kitchen (Artist's Choice)

Jul 16, 2008 15:36

Title: Cooks in the Kitchen
Rating: NC-17
Author: x_los
Pairing: Three/Simm!Master/Delgado!Master/Ten
Prompt: Artist's Choice, from best_enemies' table challenge, cleaned response from the b_e Anon Meme
Beta: deborah_judge helped with the tone shift and the silliness level ( Read more... )

ten/master, brigadier, simm!master, three/master, fanfiction, delgado!master

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hangingfire July 16 2008, 21:16:28 UTC
That.

Was marvellous.

♥! I'm afraid I'm too incoherent with glee to offer anything more substantive.

(Oh, er -- "deer in headlights", a few paragraphs up there.)

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x_losfic July 16 2008, 21:49:22 UTC
Fixed the 'deep', thanks!

And glad you liked. It's kind of a crack for all seasons. I mean, Old Spice? Off topic ftw. But yeah. It goes there.

Hey, how do you make the little bar thingey like that anyway? Dumb question, I know, but I've never figured it out. :(

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hangingfire July 17 2008, 00:18:52 UTC
The beauty of it is that, cracky though it may be, the character voices are all spot on. It wouldn't work nearly so well otherwise.

Bar thingy ... Oh, you know what, I bet that's the way the browser is rendering the ♥ code. :) I get that on Firefox for Mac, but the heart character appears, well, as a heart on Safari and on Firefox for PC. No idea why.

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x_losfic July 17 2008, 01:29:07 UTC
Thanks! That totally warms the cockles of my afraid-of-writing-Ten-and-Simm!Master heart.

Oooooh. That explains so, so much. *blush* Thanks.

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gritsinmisery July 16 2008, 21:31:53 UTC
Oh my. Oh my. I do love it when you expand an anon-pr0n.

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x_losfic July 16 2008, 21:51:01 UTC
Thanks! That actually is good to hear (I was kinda worried I was just doing it for my OCD hate of having messy, unfinished things, and that it was lightly annoying to have to see something pop up when you'd already been there, read that.).

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infraredphaeton July 16 2008, 21:38:26 UTC
I am currently making strange hissy sounds to try and avoid waking up my housemates with laughter. This was *brilliant*
You have their voices perfectly.

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x_losfic July 16 2008, 21:52:22 UTC
Ha! Like a snake! Ssss. And thanks so much. They have really fun voices to write.

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x_losfic July 16 2008, 21:52:50 UTC
Thanks, glad you liked. :D

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daniramble July 16 2008, 21:59:44 UTC
So after reading the other one I just commented on I decided in investigate your journel.

I've had a huge grin fixed on my face for the past few minutes. I'm also giggling quite a lot.

My poor flatmate...

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daniramble July 16 2008, 22:11:29 UTC
Just read my comment over... I meant journal with an "A" I honestly did. See what you did to my brain? You smushed into little smushy pieces.

:-D

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x_losfic July 16 2008, 22:13:13 UTC
Aw, thanks! Have fun with that, it's all neatly index'd (b/c I'm that anal retentive).

V. glad this amused you! And yes, all your As are belong to me.

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