A Matter Of Choice: Chapter 4

[x_cybergoth_x]

And a quick one to be going on with, really short this time.

Previous Chapters:
Prologue
Lord Wirrnächte
The Waiting…
First Blood

Comments

[calalily4596]

the style and flow seems to be broken here but the content is still really good.

[x_cybergoth_x]

I experimented a lot with writing techniques with this piece, it is my first ever fiction, fan or otherwise. As such some things are a touch naive, unpolished, but I cannot imagine changing it any more than I have (you don't want to know how long this has been edited or how many times) I ask you to bear with the scrappy parts and forgive the fact I was a teenager 10 years ago when I began this fic.

[calalily4596]

I'm not complaining. I guess what I said was unnesasary. It was only meant to be an honest critique, no more.

[x_cybergoth_x]

oh hon, the critique is welcome. In some ways I was trying to explain the history of this peice. One of the reasons I have given up editing this is that its a marker of how far I've come. Critique all you like, its how I learn!