Submission #13 -- Grius, "Wishes Granted"

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Title: Wishes Granted
Author: Gruis
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Summary: Life as the former antichrist can be strange. Happily, taking things out on innocent bystanders is still satisfying.

Comments

[periergeia]

Wow, this was great! A wonderful admixture of humour, creepiness, insanity, and hopelessness. And yet it left me feeling happy. Well done! ^^

[metisket]

Thank you! I was trying to keep it from being crushingly depressing, which is kind of a trick with X, so I'm glad it made you happy. :)

[japanimecrazed]

This was wonderful! That girl is my favorite character in all of X, and it was great to read about her ten years older. She was funny!

[metisket]

I like her too. She's such a random ball of sunshine. Thank you for the comment!

[thenakedcat]

Oh Fuuma. He's never going to stop being "be careful what you wish for" personified.

[metisket]

It must be true. Even if he survives it all, I have to think he's always going to be a little...hm.

Thank you for the comment!

[uminohikari]

Oh. My. God. I totally forgot about the little girl, so the end was such a shock. *.* That was amazing.

♥♥♥

[metisket]

Thank you so much! I was hoping it would be a surprise. *dances around*

[kiraya]

I was just quietly amused (and loving some of those really hard-hitting lines) -- and then you sprung that ending on us. I love this.

[metisket]

Thank you so much! I'm glad the ending worked. :D