Submission #24 -- Pictoris, "Lost and Found"

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Title: Lost and Found
User ID Pictoris
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairing: Subaru, Seishirou, Hokuto
Warnings: None
Summary: The Sumeragi twin's first apartment was still inhabited when they moved in.

Comments

[ariss_tenoh]

I love the similarity here between the lost cat/10 years/waiting for someone to find it and the eventual outcome of Subaru and Seishirou's bet. Very subtle.

That last line is telling.

[rose_erato]

I enjoyed reading this very much ^_^

[mithrigil]

Fantastic take on the prompt.

[uminohikari]

Aww, the cat made me so sad. I love the hints at what we know will happen in the future!

[sailorcoruscant]

Poor kitty. This is a lovely story that fits so well into the Tokyo Babylon canon. You've got the characters just right. :)