Tilly and The Nursery pt 1

[wytchcroft]

Comments

[wytchcroft]

thanks :))) hoping the story pans out...

[stoshagownozad]

me is intrigued :)))

thanks:)

[wytchcroft]

i hope you will enjoy this story:)

[jillain]

can't wait for the next part =)

[wytchcroft]

hey:) thanks!:)

[med_cat]

Intriguing beginning :)

[autumnsea]

Nicely set up. The thing I liked most was the dialogue and the description and setting. You're exact and lay out the place and people very well. I also like that this beginning hints at other things, unexpected turns and alike. :)

I know this is an older piece but here's a quick edit for you,

Everybody called the Matrons ‘Mum’ as well as Matron, or even the full Madam upon occasion, to have one stood before you, in your own room no less, was an honour.

Should that be 'to have one stand before you...'?

[wytchcroft]

ah thanks for the kindly comment (and for reading!).

no, 'stood' is correct (i think) given the language, i could have said 'standing' but even that would be off slightly.

[wytchcroft]

i could be wrong though... i often am! :)))