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Feb 17, 2012 10:01

take every uncooked line
find all the half-baked words

tear them from the oven
feed them to the birds.

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bennybunny February 17 2012, 12:28:05 UTC
This is delightful, Nic. More poetry please!

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i find your lack of subtitle disturbing (wheeze-hiss-koff-hack! etc.) wytchcroft February 17 2012, 15:11:50 UTC
um... c'mon, this isn't even a limerick,
but truthfully - i appreciate the compliment! :))

hmmm, and maybe one day... inspiration will come...

i wandered lonely as a saab
That burns real fast o'er Vale and Hill,
a 900 super-turbo you best believe
will leave you shaking like a Daffodil;

*scarpers*

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Scarpe Diem bennybunny February 17 2012, 16:56:08 UTC
Hahaha. Nice.

But seriously, post more, you are self evidently one of the brightest people on here, with no disrespect meant to any of my loved ones, the facts speak for themselves, and I'm sure you have a ton of interesting writing to contribute in this field, I won't tolerate modesty, false or otherwise, on the subject. You have clearly seen and read enough to find the semblance of some scintillating spines for prose and poem alike. Stand and deliver!

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Re: Scalp Dem! wytchcroft February 17 2012, 17:14:06 UTC
LOL! :)) stand and deliver? i'm hip to your prince charming act!

but we'll see :))

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Hip To The Hop bennybunny February 17 2012, 18:41:21 UTC
I am fond of Prince, and obviously quite charming to the naked eye, the only thing that is prepared to be naked for me these days. But i would be a shocking Prince, more a frog with my diminutive sartorially elegant attire and love of the colour green. I am a rags to rags story, but I by and large prefer it this way, lobster wasn't for me. Don't even wish it on me, I hate soirees, and castles, when I see them, I hear my Grandma's wizening voice 'it'sa alla very wella buying youra bigga swank-ay castle, butta whosa gonna clean it? MUGGINS HERE I SUPPOSE. PAH! I Doooona think SO.' In her best pissed off Super Mario voice.

She could take the fun out of copulating with wood nymphs on top of bed-sheet made from winning lottery tickets.

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Re: Hip replacement Hop out wytchcroft February 17 2012, 18:49:16 UTC
gah! old wytch is old - Prince? i was thinking Adam and the Ants!

bu-u-t if we're talking the Squiggled one, gotta say; Raspberry Beret, Sign o'the times, Alphabet Street - lotta fine tunes, fine times.

grandmas and wood nymphs?
there's often more than meets the eye...

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