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wynter_rebel

Taken Chapter 4/10

Mar 15, 2006 23:23

Well here's chapter four. It's a bit longer than the last one since chapter three was a bit short. Sorry about that! This chapter's rated R, for blood and violence. I hope you enjoy!

( Chapter Four )

fanfic, storytaken

Comments 13

marinarusalka March 16 2006, 04:48:06 UTC

Ow! That bit with Dean and the hook through the shoulder totally made me wince in sympathy. You write such good action scenes, they always feel very real and visceral.

Sam's musings about the endlessly disappearing Winchesters were funny and sad at the same time, and also very true. Hopefully, he'll find
Dean soon.

wynter_rebel March 16 2006, 05:00:13 UTC

:-D Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, the shoulder part had me wincing a couple of times too, lol.

kiraboshi March 16 2006, 04:52:27 UTC

Whoah. Hook time, eh? Did it go through his shoulder from the back, or is hooking through the front?

Oh man, Sam's in trouble. Dun DUN!

wynter_rebel March 16 2006, 05:01:57 UTC

Hehe, he's hooked from the top, near his collar bone, and it comes down and around. Ouchies.

mellaithwen March 16 2006, 08:19:34 UTC

So genetically enhances bastardominos? No wait, that's-wrong fandom *cough* aherm, maybe they're hyped up on some meteor rock liquids? DAMN IT, maybe they're half Wendigo--there we go thats more Supernatural :D

^^Not my fault Jensen's no strange to that genre...

wynter_rebel March 16 2006, 18:14:33 UTC

Hehe, we'll see what's up with these dudes. :)

anonymous March 16 2006, 17:29:10 UTC

Brilliant. Simply brilliant. How do you write like this? You are seriously unbelievably talented. I loved the beginning where Sam is blaming his dad for the mess. Those images are seriously graphic. You made me cry out and cringe! Haha, that "Boy Scout" and "you go girl" made me laugh out loud. Please, UPDATE SOON!!

wynter_rebel March 16 2006, 22:49:49 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

a_decembrist March 17 2006, 01:20:32 UTC

Oh my goodness. That's just absolutely disgusting. I saw an exhibit on torture at a wax museum in Vancouver, and I think some people in Africa punish criminals by hanging them off a meathook. *gags* And crap, Sam. You're supposed to rescue your brother, not get in trouble yourself! He obviously needs more hero lessons from Dean.

That part about the cheeseburger...it made me hungry. Yummy!

wynter_rebel March 17 2006, 01:28:17 UTC

Ick. I want to go visit a torture exhibit at a museum one time. When I went to Germany we took a couple tours of some castles and I saw a couple torture chambers there, but I want to see a really good one. Just because. I'm not sick or anything...lol.

Mmm, I had a really nice cheeseburger tonight. From Ruby Tuesday's. :-D The Julius Cheezer, lol!