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Low-life, High-strung (5/12)

Jul 02, 2010 00:19

Title: Low-life, High-strung (5/12)
Pairing: Everyone/Jaejoong
Length: 2,516w (11,772 total)
Summary: Jaejoong, a successful internet porn star, returns to his estranged family after the death of his mother leaves some loose ends.

Previous Chapters: Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 | Chapter 4

( Some things don't heal. Some things don't just fucking go away. )

fic: low-life high-strung, length: more than 10 000 words, status: complete, fandom: dbsk, content: smut, pairing: yoochun/jaejoong

Comments 29

abcdefghiluvyou July 1 2010, 23:27:26 UTC

YESSSSS

abcdefghiluvyou July 1 2010, 23:40:49 UTC

wohaaaaaa intense!!!
my god, that JaeChun action
was beyond HOT -even when it was
so quick and kinda unsatisfying for
both of them. (but lol chun came -but
duh who wouldn't)

I miss changmin, can't help it. even
with an awesome sexy yunho, a nice chun
and a motivated junsu around.

I wonder what junsu whispered into Jae's
ear. grrrrr can't wait for the next update
you TEASE!!!

wynnetimate July 3 2010, 12:57:24 UTC

There will be Changmin sometime soon, bb. Patience! :)

xoxoxox

k_chan91 July 2 2010, 00:58:27 UTC

Joongie! T.T I like how you tie in emotions with totally hot and delicous >8D smut scenes. Ah, very nice, very nice~

I could feel the pain and the Jaejoong hotness >8DD in this one. And now I shall cuddle teh Boojae

*cuddles Joongie while giving you cookies*
<33

k_chan91 July 2 2010, 00:58:53 UTC

2nd spot, yo! >8D

wynnetimate July 3 2010, 12:58:00 UTC

*munches cookies*

Thank you!

crimson_miharu July 2 2010, 01:34:25 UTC

WOW! Jae is so fucked up it's not even funny. How can you suck someone off then not want them to touch you even when the person is your former bestfriend. I get he only did it to distract Chun from what he had said but dang it's messed up...

wynnetimate July 3 2010, 12:58:50 UTC

Jae has some issues in this one, shall we say...

Thanks for reading! <3

ur_a_funny_1 July 2 2010, 02:10:09 UTC

OMG!!! no. very NOT boring!!!!

i love your characters, and the angst and the tension between the three is such hurt and sad

and and and i just love it and i need more!!!!!!!!

sndgzkhlieruh;wio3ebtuzhs gah! so hot and emotional and brilliant.

wynnetimate July 3 2010, 12:59:50 UTC

Thanks! That's what I was going for. Glad it's not as boring as I thought!

<3

eklivejour July 2 2010, 02:58:56 UTC

Seems like jae is using sex as a form of escapism

Wonder why Jae is so nasty to Yoochun...jealousy?

Getting more interesting :)

wynnetimate July 3 2010, 13:00:45 UTC

Hit the nail on the head with the escapism thing there.

Jae's emotions toward Yoochun are rather... complex. All will be revealed in time. :)

Thanks for reading. <3