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Call Me Oppa (4/?)

Dec 08, 2010 20:41

Title: Call Me Oppa (4/?)
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Length: 3,047w (11,992 total)
Summary: "Some people are just unlucky."

Previous Chapters: Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3

( Jinki couldn't tear his eyes away from the strangely intimate sight of Taemin's toes flexing against the carpet. He had long toes; monkey feet. )

fandom: shinee, fic: call me oppa, pairing: onew/taemin

Comments 13

keiyashi December 9 2010, 01:51:17 UTC

spot!

keiyashi December 9 2010, 02:01:22 UTC

This is nothing against you, but I absolutely hate how short each part is! I love it too much for it to end so fast...
;3;

The tension between Taemin and his dad gave me chills...I've seen kids with parents like this before, and ugh...it makes me shiver.

You write Taemin so sweetly ♥

what's Taesun's problem? }:

coffeebang December 9 2010, 01:56:12 UTC

These chapters feel so short, like a tease.

au_astronomer December 9 2010, 03:07:54 UTC

upload more~!!
what is it between taemin and his father other than dance? hmmmm... :S
he sounds really fragile for some reason.

rennonyanyan December 9 2010, 05:01:19 UTC

One update per day? Yes. Thanks for adding the real dancer Taemin here. It's a good point since most fics didn't put it. Family shit *shrugs nice how you write Jinki's character here. And I heart your writing style. I haven't read much author come from Canada and States. Yours a good eye opener to another style of writing. Detailed but not overwhelming. Thanks for being a good reference :)

abcdefghiluvyou December 9 2010, 05:01:30 UTC

best chapter so far -at least for me haha :'D
might change my opinion once I read everything
again though.

Jams I had a terrible terrible day. it's 6 am
now, I spent more than 20 hours on craziness I
swear and I'm tired, disappointed, upset and
exhausted so it's really really nice to see this
updated ♥ a small comfort before going to bed and
admitting that this day will just end as the mess
it is.

ilu ♥ :)