[FIC] Low-Life, High-strung (8/12)

Jul 14, 2010 01:10

Title: Low-life, High-strung (8/12)
Pairing: Everyone/Jaejoong
Length: 2,776w (20,369 total)
Summary: Jaejoong, a successful internet porn star, returns to his estranged family after the death of his mother leaves some loose ends.

Previous Chapters: Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 | Chapter 4 | Chapter 5 | Chapter 6 | Chapter 7

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fic: low-life high-strung, pairing: junsu/jaejoong, length: more than 10 000 words, status: complete, fandom: dbsk, pairing: yunho/jaejoong

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be_ddelusionall July 14 2010, 00:15:59 UTC
SMUT!!!

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be_ddelusionall July 14 2010, 00:26:54 UTC
You shouldn't say your writing sucks or you hate a chapter in your author notes. Sort of has a tendency to influence your reader. Might make someone say "oh well if she thinks it sucks ... "

Your writing is good. Your stories are good. Deal with it. :)

OMG! the flashback was painful, but the YunJae at the end made me go *EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE*

*waits* impatiently for the next one *giggles*

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julili July 14 2010, 00:30:46 UTC
good this she put the a/n at the end and not beginning then!

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be_ddelusionall July 14 2010, 00:44:50 UTC
yes, but I have been known to NOT leave comments because of the A/N at the end that say stuff like that. i dont' know ... I think you should just let the reader decide for themselves.

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wynnetimate July 14 2010, 00:32:13 UTC
Haha, fixed it. You're totally right. I just always feel the need to apologize in advance when I feel something is sub-par. Doesn't help that you write INCREDIBLY AWESOME STORIES and make me feel all self-conscious. :P

Thanks, hon. xo

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be_ddelusionall July 14 2010, 00:43:51 UTC
dude. If you knew how incredibly insecure I am about my writing then you would take that back. Half the things I write, I want to rewrite. Or I'll be like, ooh, I should have done it this way. Sometimes, the things I HATE the most are the things that people comment on the most.

and some chapters it takes me 23425 years to write 2000 words.

it comes and goes.

i LOVE your writing, and your stories.

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