Fireborn: Footprints in the Sand

[wyld_dandelyon]

Welcome to my new readers. Fireborn starts here: Wings on His Fingers.
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DRAGON

When he had finally found her-or, more accurately, when she found him, Orchid had looked so sick and miserable, he could barely credit that she could still fly. Windborns were always slender; now she was past gaunt to skeletal, her boniness

Comments

[jolantru]

Dragon has a ... soft side?

Mmmm. :)

[wyld_dandelyon]

You wouldn't think it, from his chosen name, would you?

Of course, that's not the sort of things boys his age feel comfortable showing.

[jenstclair]

Yay, she found a friend!

[wyld_dandelyon]

Yeah. He's quite thoroughly insinuated himself into the story, hasn't he?

I'm wondering if I should do some earlier chapters from his perspective, as a perk for supporters.

[hakeber]

Well, you finally got me reading.

[wyld_dandelyon]

Yay! Welcome. :-D

[sweetmusic_27]

These are great! I love that I have writerly-talented friends. Stories do make many screens of text, though... maybe an LJ-cut is the solution? I really like them because then I can get a little quote, or a preview/teaser of the story which I can remember to click back to, on those days when it's a TL;DR problem.

It's really easy, too, you just do "" and then do a "" at the end!

[sweetmusic_27]

Ooops. That's "[lj-cut text="Orchid creeps out Dragon, and Skimmer is a liar."]" and then "[/lj-cut]" at the end, but replace the square brackets with angle-brackets like < and >.

[wyld_dandelyon]

There--cut added. Thanks for the reminder.

[wyld_dandelyon]

I'm glad you're liking it!

I usually use the lj cut--forgot today. As I've noted elsewhere, the Olympics are distracting!

[red_trillium]

I'm glad Orchid has found an ally, hopefully she'll get safe home to her mom and avoid Skimmer's traps.

And thank you for my story, I really enjoyed it! :)

[wyld_dandelyon]

I'm glad you enjoyed, both this and that!