Fireborn: Seeking Skimmer

Oct 14, 2009 23:29

Here is another installment in the story that begins with Wings on His Fingers.
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ORCHID

Orchid circled above the school, seeing the three women rushing toward the cook-tent, scattering sand under their feet.  Other people were doing various things, though a few obviously took note of the small, angry procession.

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red_trillium October 18 2009, 08:40:22 UTC
I like the way you've captured Orchid and Dragon, both are very kid-ish. And I like that Orchid kept getting distracted while she was flying. :) That sounds like me!

Thank you for posting this. I'm looking forward to next week's! I had a hard afternoon and was glad to have this to look forward to read to make it a bit better.

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wyld_dandelyon October 18 2009, 10:10:11 UTC
Oh, I'm glad!

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mbumby October 23 2009, 19:14:59 UTC
Typo, m'dear:

“Great. Thanks!” Lotus leapt into the air, and started flying.

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wyld_dandelyon October 23 2009, 20:28:50 UTC
Stupid dyslexic wordos!!!! Thanks for catching it.

And good to see you're having time to catch up with your reading.

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mbumby October 23 2009, 21:06:41 UTC
Only way I can really justify OVFF is if I do other stuff at the same time.

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wyld_dandelyon October 23 2009, 21:15:27 UTC
As a musician, my mind boggles at trying to do other stuff and music at OVFF. But at least you're there!

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