Feather-Blessed: A Wordless Call

[wyld_dandelyon]

To my loyal readers, an apology that this took so long. I'm still trying to find ways to balance my writing schedule with working full time. I suspect it will always be a challenge, but I'll try to get better at it.

In case you're a new reader, the first Feather-Blessed story is here.
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Purple and yellow, magenta and green

Comments

[ellenmillion]

This is sweet!

[wyld_dandelyon]

Thanks!

[jenny_evergreen]

*waits patiently for the next installment* :)

[wyld_dandelyon]

I'm glad you're enjoying it!

[miintikwa]

This is so fantastic--in all senses of the word!

[wyld_dandelyon]

Thank you!

[mdlbear]

Nice.

[wyld_dandelyon]

:-D

[kelkyag]

Still not finished! I am also on the "waiting as patiently as I can for the next installment" list.

If Stella identified herself, or if Mrs. Brownie realizes that the girl she found is not the one who called, or recognizes the book, Mrs. B could easily still be in the park looking for the girls.

A different girl reading the book could get a feather of her own and with it a path to Home, which all three of them could follow.

[wyld_dandelyon]

So, should I play up the cost of becoming dragons (severing relations with the ordinary, human world, and the people in it) or the reward for good deeds? Which thread should I pick up and follow to the end? Which one will make the best story?

[kelkyag]

Yes? Either of those could work story-wise

[wyld_dandelyon]

Ooh--interesting thoughts!

Thank you!