Hunger

Mar 03, 2010 11:15

Title: Hunger
Characters: Jack, Ianto and cameos by a couple of other characters
Excerpt: Jack is aware of the fact that the hunger itself only happens in his head; it's all a question of chemistry....
Word Count: ~2700ish
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: mentions of torture, apart from that: food!p0rn, hand!p0rn, mind!p0rn and p0rn!p0rn
Spoilers: Spoilers ( Read more... )

character: ianto, tw_lucky_7, character: jack

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remuslives23 March 3 2010, 10:28:22 UTC
God, I love this! This is the food porn I'm trying to write and failing badly at.

*heads for cold shower*

Delicious use of this week's prompt! :)

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wykling March 3 2010, 10:41:07 UTC
Girl, you are fast! xD

LOL, you know, once you get that food!p0rn is not that different from p0rn!p0rn the writing gets lots easier, just let the juices flow, the flavours explode and cream burst out of something and you've got food!p0rn en masse ;D

*giggles*

Thank you! :D

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madder_rose March 3 2010, 10:29:31 UTC
APPLAUSE!

Brilliant! Really, actually, brilliant. The way Jack eats and eats, like people who've lost everything in war keep hoarding things, and filling a void inside with food. And then only exchanging the food for something else. Addicts don't stop, they replace...

and the porn.... sno-pile!

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wykling March 3 2010, 10:48:59 UTC
Yay!!!

*beams and twirls madder around*

Thank you! That's exactly what I was trying to bring across with my fic :D

*giggles and fans you*

Also: ICON LOVE!!! <3

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madder_rose March 3 2010, 18:32:55 UTC
*is twirly-spinny-dizzy* :D

Yep, I can see Jack trying to stuff a hole with food. He did the alcohol thing, but starvation would push him into going for food, all the time, whenever he could, gorging himself on it. Also, I could completely see Ianto not mentioning it at all, but just pushing until Jack gives in, and switches...

heh. I lav the dog. But LJ shrunk it :(

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wykling March 3 2010, 18:56:35 UTC
Yep, I can see Jack trying to stuff a hole with food.
...I know I shouldn't laugh at this bit of your comment but infantile as I am I totally did! LOL! xD

EDIT: I still am, infact *slaps self* Bad Bunny! Stop laughing!

Yep, I imagine that Jack has big troubles keeping himself in check once part of his self control is gone. He is very bipolar in this aspect, either nothing or everything, that's at least how he treads with the alcohol.

Jack enjoyed the switching bit very muchly. *looks at Jack and Ianto who reenact the switching part rather furiously* Oh yes! xD

LOL, I know, it's my Lj layout, it resizes the icons to 80x80px. I still love the doggie though, who doesn't love a Captain Jack? ;3

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szm March 3 2010, 10:33:30 UTC
Wow! Fantastic fic, I love the sense of Jack desperation. Thank you

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wykling March 3 2010, 10:54:05 UTC
Thank you! :D

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zsazsa4168 March 3 2010, 11:37:11 UTC
This is great. Jack with an eating disorder is so unexpected and yet you made it make sense, seem a part of who he is.

And the porn, of course, just makes it that much better.

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wykling March 3 2010, 16:45:21 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm over the moon that I managed to make the eating disorder believable. I think that Jack is a very self disciplined man but once something causes him to break his own rules moderation becomes an almost impossible for him :3

*grins* Porn makes everything better ;D

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wykling March 3 2010, 16:54:12 UTC
Thank you very muchly! I aim to disturb... I think I should be disturbed by this statement alone *laughs* No but really, I'm very happy that you liked my fic.

Jack is a very tragic character but still always somehow manages to move on and live his life despite all the pain that hits him in the face. I think that's an aspect of him we all admire.

I agree about TYTNW, if RTD kept making references to Torchwood in S3 he should have made a couple of more references to DW in Torchwood, at least about the emotional impact on Jack other than realizing how much he loves his team.

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