pairechallenge; drabble #17: hair; Hawk-like Eyes (Heroes, Paire)

Sep 10, 2008 16:21

Title: Hawk-like Eyes (And What They See)
Characters/Pairing: Peter/Claire (canon)
Summary: Sometimes a politician's eyes came in handy - other times Nathan wished he just couldn't see.
Rating: G
Spoilers: Season 1, really.
Disclaimer: Not miiiiine.
Author's note: Written for pairechallenge drabble #17 "Hair." :D And I don't think Nathan would be as dense as ( Read more... )

pairechallenge, fic: paire, tv: heroes, fic: heroes

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hari_kari September 10 2008, 20:46:09 UTC
Aww, cute. Well done! I love the last line. :)

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wuhdemah September 10 2008, 20:48:43 UTC
Wow, that was fast! XD Haha, thank you! <3

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wuhdemah September 10 2008, 21:19:42 UTC
Awww, thank you so much! =D

Haha, I am not alone in the world! :) Yeah, Nathan wouldn't be accepting of their relationship by any means but it's not like he could really blame either or them, right?

Thanks so much for the comment. <3

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fallenmagic September 10 2008, 21:26:29 UTC
Love Nathan's reaction to this! I like that he's not completely ignorant (though I should talk, I make him oblivious in all my fics xD) but he doesn't completely like it either. And the moment could seriously be a part of the show; so sweet <3

You're really good at things like that, you know, you take a small moment and make it have so much meaning, and then there's really the feeling that it could actually belong in the Heroes verse =)

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wuhdemah September 10 2008, 21:33:04 UTC
Thank you~! <3 Haha, sometimes it's funnier when he's not aware, I think, it's just like, "Nathan, you're an idiot. Really now."

And doubly thanks! =) That's one of the best compliments I could ever receive. <33 Especially from you (did I ever mention your fanfics were among the ones that inspired me to start writing Paire in the first place? xD)

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fallenmagic September 10 2008, 21:38:57 UTC
Pssh? Really? I can't take any credit for your awesome fanfics, but still, thanks hehe. That's probably the best compliment I've ever recieved as well <3

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vonwifflepuff September 11 2008, 03:04:34 UTC
Oh, those little moments... you captured it perfectly. I also loved the last line.

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wuhdemah September 11 2008, 03:06:25 UTC
Thank you for the comment! <3 And I'm glad you loved the last line. :D

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michelsita September 11 2008, 04:20:44 UTC
I love, love, love, love this!
This is becoming a trend when it comes to your fics....

The little drabble made me giggle (like the girl I am) remembering first crushes and how you expect that he notices that you changed your shampoo.

I like that this drabble could fit perfectly in your previous fic for the breathe challenge.

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wuhdemah September 11 2008, 04:26:45 UTC
Ohgosh, it would fit in with my breathe challenge fic, wouldn't it? I hadn't even thought about that! The little things you accidently do...

Thanks so much for the comment, I'm so glad you liked it. <33

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michelsita September 11 2008, 05:43:09 UTC
*headslap*
I forgot to say that I also loved that it was all from Nathan's POV: his brother and his daughter under his own roof it's too much even for him.

Well it's a happy accident indeed, it could be part of the same S1 universe.

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wuhdemah September 11 2008, 13:20:42 UTC
Haha, thanks again! Poor Nathan, didn't know what he was getting himself into with the two of them...

And I'm also glad you think it can fit in the universe! I told fallenmagic earlier that that was one of the best compliments I could ever receive, and it still stands. <3

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