Lol well I was going to use this one, but then I thought it wouldn't properly convey the emotional roller coaster I experienced at the hands of your writing. XP
SAFBCJSBCVJSBNVC SJZVDC I CANT BE COHERENT RIGHT NOW THIS IS BEAUTIFUL AND GORGEOUS AND IM SPEECHLESS CAUSE I EXPECTED MORE BUT THEY JUMP. THEY JUMP. ;A;
After seeing the ending, I really appreciated that last moment with the five of them so much more. You've conveyed Jae's feeling in this part ("When it all ends and Jaejoong is plagued by sleepless nights, he will go over that moment again, and again, and again") so well. It turns to be not only his but also the readers emotion and now I have this urge to re-read this and see them together again ;~~~;
This comment probably made no sense but ajdbcjsbcx i love it okay :< ♥♥♥♥♥
This really is a beautiful piece of writing-poignant and startlingly real even with the fantasy setting. It also hurts because of the friendship ties and what we know of TVXQ's history. I loved how you portrayed them climbing higher and higher whilst being chained further to a life they didn't want. I haven't seen this type of writing in the fandom for a while and it makes me happy to see it again! Continue writing! ♥
Reading about their history - both pre-debut and during their entire DB5K career - was really both fascinating and sad at the same time. I tried to incorporate some of it here so it means a lot to me that it was actually recognised XD
Nooooooooooooooooooo OMG What is this. This is seriously the best thing I have read. So good. So sad but good. You are one hell of a writer. Great job hun. :)
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I'm so, so happy you liked it! Thank you so much for the beautiful compliments and for even getting to the end of this monster ;~; ♥
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I'm sorry for the emotional whiplash! I feel like that's me whenever I read about DB5K's history ;o;!!
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SAFBCJSBCVJSBNVC SJZVDC I CANT BE COHERENT RIGHT NOW THIS IS BEAUTIFUL AND GORGEOUS AND IM SPEECHLESS CAUSE I EXPECTED MORE BUT THEY JUMP. THEY JUMP. ;A;
After seeing the ending, I really appreciated that last moment with the five of them so much more. You've conveyed Jae's feeling in this part ("When it all ends and Jaejoong is plagued by sleepless nights, he will go over that moment again, and again, and again") so well. It turns to be not only his but also the readers emotion and now I have this urge to re-read this and see them together again ;~~~;
This comment probably made no sense but ajdbcjsbcx i love it okay :< ♥♥♥♥♥
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It also hurts because of the friendship ties and what we know of TVXQ's history. I loved how you portrayed them climbing higher and higher whilst being chained further to a life they didn't want. I haven't seen this type of writing in the fandom for a while and it makes me happy to see it again! Continue writing! ♥
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Reading about their history - both pre-debut and during their entire DB5K career - was really both fascinating and sad at the same time. I tried to incorporate some of it here so it means a lot to me that it was actually recognised XD
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