the you I forgot

Dec 10, 2011 20:28

Name: the you I forgot
Pairing: YunJae / DB5K-ish
Genre: ): kind of sort of. 
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Jaejoong wakes up in the middle of Seoul and the first thing he’s conscious of is that he’s about seven centimetres shorter and has really terrible hair.

A/N: Missing Yoochun for the sake of accuracy (he only joined a few months before debut yes?) but he ( Read more... )

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springtides December 10 2011, 09:46:17 UTC
Changmin is slow to warm and even slower to forgive, but give them food, quiet hours together as two friends, two brothers, two teammates and Jaejoong would be able to find an apology and Changmin might find one too.

this just slammed me in the face because this could apply even in the present. ugh you.

Jaejoong wakes up to 2012 in the middle of Seoul, his lungs filled with something like love.

ohhhhhhhhh yes.

do i need to tell you how good this fic makes me feel? this time travel is handled so well. and your pacing is fantastic. and you are fantastic. stop it. (no wait! don't!)

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twicefolds December 10 2011, 09:50:35 UTC
*basks in the glorious light of Rina!praise* ♥

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springtides December 10 2011, 11:18:22 UTC
also bc you asked for fact nitpicking:
What comes out of his mouth is, “You’re amazing, hyung.”
jaejoong calls junsu 'hyung' but jaejoong is older and therefore junsu's hyung, not the other way around.

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twicefolds December 10 2011, 11:30:32 UTC
Wasn't Junsu a senior at the company though (compared to Jaejoong)? Yeah, thinking now hyung is the wrong word since Jae's older but would Jaejoong have called Junsu just 'Junsu' (given Korea's super serious respect hierarchy)?

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textparade December 10 2011, 13:32:12 UTC
Terrified of saying too much. Terrified of saying too little.

lksadlakdal this was amazing wtf - made it sort of painful cos this felt so damn real but it was really good, memming <3

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twicefolds December 10 2011, 23:00:37 UTC
Thanks for the mem, I'm so glad you liked it!

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shinchul303 December 10 2011, 15:35:19 UTC
This is amazing. Amazing! God I love this fic--I can't imagine it being written any other way.

Perfection. Sighs...

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twicefolds December 10 2011, 23:01:09 UTC
Oh wow, thank you for the high praise ^u^ ♥

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snow_meow December 10 2011, 18:37:09 UTC
I love this fic.

All the what ifs.
To be able to time travel, realize all the things that have been missed and learning to appreciate them.

It's also so sad to read how much Jaejoong misses them.

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twicefolds December 10 2011, 23:03:17 UTC
Thank you for commenting ♥ I feel like Jae would miss them/does miss them the most but idk, I hope he's happy right now as well ):

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carrotsandroses December 11 2011, 07:09:08 UTC
Time-travel fics have always been my biggest weakness, and this really is no exception, haha. I really like the two lines prior to the ending, I found them quite nice.

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twicefolds December 11 2011, 11:09:46 UTC
Thank you for the comment! I spent awhile trying to find the right words for the end so I'm glad you liked it~ c:

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