Mar 03, 2018 03:11
"It was limpid Dumbledore had all but voiced he was going to do the opposite." Lol what?
Seriously, this is a good fan fic but there's so much of this going on in it. Some of the words they use aren't even words! Also a lot of weird word order going on, like " 'blah blah,' sadly Alexandra said." It's jarring.