HEALING - twenty-nine in The Little Things series

[writwritewrote]

Title: HEALING
Author: Michmak
Rating: Teen / Mature
Characters: Jayne, River, Simon, Mal, Kaylee
Pairings: Jayne/River
Disclaimers: Not mine.

Summary: “Simon,” she says, “Simon - he’s awake!”

A/N: Did you really think I'd kill him?

This follows CURRENTS, which can be found here: CURRENTS

Comments

[aliaspiral]

*flails* um. GUH is about all i can think of to say about that last bit. eek.

the mental image of River giving Jayne sponge baths..and the conversations that must have taken place between her and Simon before Simon gave up...HEE.

i love the part where River is talking for him to Kaylee. that worked very well.

YAY! Jayne isnt dead and SMUT! WHOO!

[writwritewrote]

I had a whole long conversation between River and Simon plotted out about the sponge bath thing, but it just didn't fit. Made the story choppy and threw off the flow, so I ditched it. Just have to use your imagination, I guess.

I'm glad you like the River-Jayne / Kaylee convo - I had a hard time with that, wondering if I should keep it or change it or wait until the tube wasn't there....

And c'mon now...would I really kill JAYNE? *shakes head*

[aliaspiral]

well, i probably would..so you might too.

literarylemming and i have a thing about killing off our favorite characters. she does it in evil creative ways where everyone goes insane.

i do it by feeding people to a giant man-eating orchid.

we all have our quirks.

[writwritewrote]

LOL. All of a sudden I have several different songs from "Little Shop of Horrors" running through my head, along with the mental image of Steve Martin as the sadistic dentist. *giant man-eating orchid / snerks*

Actually, I might kill him off too - but not in this story. And certainly not before he gets some action, after being all patient and un-Jayne-like with River.

[aliaspiral]

*blinks innocently* His name is Petey, and He isnt quite as...nice as Audrey is..although He does assure me they are distantly related.

HEE! good! jayne-bird deserves some nookie! and yes, please, by all means, kill him in other stories in horrific painful ways. i enjoy getting my heart ripped out on occasion.

[writwritewrote]

hmm....might have to do that, just for you...*plot bunnies attack*

[goodisrelative]

The River-Jayne/ Kaylee section was PERFECT. loved it... Loved how River kinda sounded like him and all noticed it.

and for later... Simon saying creeptifying was perfect!