Lonely

[writings_by_pam]

Title: Lonely
Author: Pamela MacLean (

Comments

[lacruciverbiste]

what a sad story :( i love that if you read the poem aloud, "paned" could just as easily by "pained," and it would still make sense to some degree. nice work.

good luck this week!
~Kate
http://lacruciverbiste.livejournal.com/7633.html

[sobitxx]

:'[ That was sad. The emotions really come through in the poem. I really liked it. Good job!

[pyre006]

goodness, reminds me of my school lunch time, not pleasant. I really like how you structured this poem with the stanza breaks and the reinforcement of the word "joy". this is a great poem :)