QUESTION! Sirius/Remus related!

Jun 23, 2009 18:01


I'm writing my first ever Sirius/Remus oneshot and it's turning out longer than I expected. It's unexpectedly difficult, too. Should I finish it? Plus, I'm busy these days so I wonder if it's worth it. I've got a sample here:

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Sirius groaned in frustration as he fisted his dick faster, wanting more friction, more touch, more pleasure, just more everything until he was desperate for just moremoremoremore. But there wasn’t any more and Sirius had to be content with his hand as he came long and hard - and still it wasn’t enough. There was still something crawling beneath Sirius’s skin, crawling and trailing fire that just wouldn’t bloody stop.

The feeling had been there for nearly two months and Sirius swore he was losing what was left of his mind. He was sure no other Black had ever gone insane this way before.

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“You shouldn’t have waited, Moony,” Sirius said, eyeing the other boy with interest. Remus wore his school uniform so well, so prim and proper that it made Sirius want to rip the perfectly ironed oxford. With his teeth. Then he grinned, baring his teeth a little more. “Though, I am fearful of how intuitive you’ve become lately. How did you know I was wanking about you, of all people?”

What do you think???

remus/sirius, harry potter, slash

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