Comeuppance

Apr 01, 2009 00:40

Title: Comeuppance
Pairing: OT5
Rating: Explicit
Summary: Jaejoong's a tease, but the others have a plan.
Author's Notes: For peppery, who I told I'd never write OT5 like this.

comeuppance )

p: ot5, c: changmin, f: dbsk

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xiahtic March 31 2009, 23:44:41 UTC
They're on the bed, Junsu straddling Yunho's lap and both of them shirtless, Yunho's hands broad against Junsu's back as Junsu trails kisses along Yunho's jawline.

AGREEING WITH JAEJOONG. askdljf sobs why don't you write ot5 porn more often!!!!!!

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kallistei April 1 2009, 00:25:01 UTC
Because it's hard work! Also what are you agreeing with.

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xiahtic April 1 2009, 01:27:57 UTC
"that's hot" XD

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yuxo March 31 2009, 23:56:11 UTC
oh my. 8D

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kallistei April 1 2009, 00:25:11 UTC
:P

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yuxo April 1 2009, 00:26:01 UTC
so, basically, i like the part where there's sex. \:D/

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kallistei April 1 2009, 00:29:14 UTC
Well, of course you do :X

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magicmelodyx March 31 2009, 23:59:33 UTC
This is amazing because A: it's crazy hot and B: I am always blown away by people who can write OT5 fic that doesn't make me stop and wonder about the physical dynamics like who's moved where and when did they get there. (Apologies if that made no sense.)

When another hand curls against his waist, Changmin figures out where Yunho is, the warmth that presses against his back a second later another clue. "You look so beautiful together," Yunho murmurs into his ear.

I bet they do, Yunnie-ah. *fans self*

But yes. This is WONDERFUL. Just what I needed on the "blah" day I've been having; thank you for sharing!

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kallistei April 1 2009, 00:28:52 UTC
:) Thank you! I'm glad the dynamics were clear to you, and that it could improve your day a little.

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tricia_xx April 1 2009, 00:05:24 UTC
eeekkk <3 so playful i love it

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kallistei April 1 2009, 00:34:08 UTC
:) Thanks!

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kallistei April 1 2009, 00:34:42 UTC
:) Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you even though it's not really your thing.

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