Fanfic - SPN: Undamaged Destiny (Sam, Dean)

[writingbyebonio]

Title: Undamaged Destiny [Evil!Sammy Universe]
Author: eboniorchid
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam Winchester, Dean Winchester
Prompt: 072. Pensive. For 100moods, challenge table here.
Word Count: ~ 6,600 words.
Rating: PG-13 for language.
Warnings/Spoilers: Gen/Pre-Slash. Angst. Future. Character study. Plot. AU after "Simon Said". Potential vague spoilers

Comments

[missyjack]

I am so glad you gave them some glimmer of hope at the end, coz up until then it was so painful! Beautiful writing as ever. loved:

And sometimes he'd wake up midway through the night, nightmares of his brother drowning in horrors playing on his mind, hearing Sam calling to him like he used to do when he was having rough nights as a kid.

[writingbyebonio]

Mmmm ... hope ... hmmm ... yes, I suppose you could call that hope. But, I mean, it's ANGST that we all know eventually turns into DARKfic. So ... ya know ... "hope" is kind of relative at this point, no? XD

I'm glad you found it beautiful as well as painful, because that's kind of what I was aiming for so ... YAY, even if it was hurty.

Wow! You + Me = Braintwins! That's totally one of my favorite lines too!

I always appreciate your feedback, honey! *snuggles*

[missyjack]

*clings to any glimmer of hope*

of course we are braintwins - ours is a match made in Heaven The Special Hell.

Did you read - Supernaturla just got confirmed for a 3rd Season!

[writingbyebonio]

*hee* Yes! 3rd season = OF THE GOOD!

[rei_c]

Oh, God. This is so painful, knowing what's coming. The glimpses of this harder, deadlier Sam, after all he's been through, and Dean just...pleased to have him back. Ouch. But very well done.

[writingbyebonio]

Thank you! Yeah ... I think painful was kind of my theme for this one ... so I'm glad the hurty-ness came through. And gah, I love how Dean's just so eager to have Sam back that he can almost, almost overlook how different he is ... almost. So I'm not exactly sorry it hurt, because it was supposed to, but ...

Thanks for the feedback!

[orphan_project]

Wow. I'm awed at the depth that you took this to. The character development that you put into this is just amazing, and I can see the tie-ins between our letters and this.

I epsecailly liked the two little kids. What a better way to warm Deans' heart right?

-hugs- Great job, and great song choice ^.~

[writingbyebonio]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the character development and the connections with the letters. And YAY you liked the kiddies! I was worried that they wouldn't work right, so I'm glad you liked them!

Thanks for the awesome feedback, babe! *hugs*

[orphan_project]

^^ I think they came out wonderfully. Reminded me of the two brothers in Something Wicked. :)

-hugs- I'm always more than happy to give it to you!!!

[writingbyebonio]

You know what's funny! I totally forgot about those Something Wicked boys until you mentioned them. That's hilarious!

And, aww honey, thanks muchly! *more hugs*

[taniapretender]

I love your serie so much and I love you even more... I love the hints of evil!sam you left, and the surprise of Sam leaving on his own, I always thought he'd been kidnapped while with Dean

[writingbyebonio]

Thanks so much for loving on this series, hun!

Mmmmm, yeah, the leaving thing. It's fun for me to hear y'all's musings about this 'verse, because I have almost everything sketched out in my head (and some of it on paper, thankfully) from the very beginning to the very end and sometimes I forget that I'm revealing new information. *hee*

Love the feedback! Thank you muchly!

[writingbyebonio]

Sammy's ... something right now ... if not already evil, he's heading in that direction, yeah. Why did he call Dean? Because he wants to be with his brother again, probably, I mean, who wouldn't want to be with Dean. If you haven't read any of the stories leading up to this one, though, I imagine this could be a little confusing. *hee*

Thanks for commenting!