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missyjack December 12 2006, 09:16:47 UTC
Me first!!! I just finished it. The confrontation be between Sam and his father was fantastic - and how he picked it was - great mirror on the canon scene. It amazes me how you used canon plot in this and STILL I was surprised.

And congratulations - its a great acheivement and a wonderful 'verse you've created. There's so many more stories I'd like to read. But before I loose those bunnies on you I'll let you bask in the glory of this!

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writingbyebonio December 12 2006, 09:44:27 UTC
Oh MJ! It's so so good to see a comment here. Because I think this fic has totally eaten my brain! XD

I'm glad you liked the Sam-Demon confrontation with the canon twisted and weaved in there!

Thank you so so much for all the encouragement!

And DUDE! There are so many more stories to tell. I mean, I know that I left lots of space to add to this timeline let alone before and after. And I'm definitely thinking this 'verse does not have enough porn yet to really be one of mine. *hee* Totally hit me up with the bunnies, baby. I'm not going to get to them any time soon, mind you, but you might as well tell me while they're on the brain, ya know.

*big hugs*

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missyjack December 12 2006, 09:58:01 UTC
I definitely want more of Sam's life with the Grigori, particularly in the early months when he is with Dean.
And Sam/Kane of course.
And while you touched on it, more of how Sam has to adjust to a 'normal' relationship.
And are there any other lovers in either Sam or Dean's past - maybe some who aren't quite human??
More Meg!!!
More Sam/Dean shameless porn. with some Sammy powers thrown in.

Well you asked for bunnies! *eyes accusingly* I told you I got totally sucked into this verse!

(BTW did you watch TW yet this week?)

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writingbyebonio December 12 2006, 11:28:13 UTC
Lots of great ideas there, MJ! Dude that past nonhuman lovers thing? You're a total genius, because yeah ... I thought about ... things ... but ... we'll see where they go. LOL! And of course lots of porn from all angles. *hee* *adds everything to to-do list*

(TW is totally on my to-watch list, but this fic kind of didn't let me, so soon I shall flail as usual, I'm sure)

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wistful_fever December 12 2006, 11:07:15 UTC
This was incredible. I read it all in one sitting and it kept me involved all the way through.

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writingbyebonio December 12 2006, 11:22:49 UTC
Wow! Thank you so much! It's great to hear that you found it engaging!

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anonymous December 12 2006, 11:46:02 UTC
I read it all in one sitting. Excellent!!

-Aya

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writingbyebonio December 12 2006, 19:13:36 UTC
Oh wow! Thanks so much!

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phoenix_bellamy December 12 2006, 13:15:52 UTC
Awesome.
I had to read it all in one go *_*...Very well done!

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writingbyebonio December 12 2006, 19:14:08 UTC
Thank you so much!

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cocombat December 12 2006, 13:31:46 UTC
I enjoyed this.
Good, entertaining read, with a fleshed out AU, and nice parallels with the canon.

Reading the prompt afterwards was hilarious though, because while this was more serious, and less camp than the prompt-novel, I could definately see the plot parallels.
So - is Dean actually of succubus descent? That sounds like an interesting idea to play with. ;)

Just to make sure I've got this straight: Sam is Mary & John's son, by way of John's possession by Azazel, right? And Azazel is the one that killed Mary, then kidnapped Sam to be raised by them, yeah?
If so, why does Sam refer to himself as a bastard? Is it because Azazel is being counted as a third parent? Or did I miss another guy there?
;)

Also, nice twist on the standard cesty guilt trip, Dean's was more the standard - oh god, my brother (but I'll deal with it anyway). Sam's more - oh god, my brother again. And ow. Could be worse things, obviously.

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writingbyebonio December 12 2006, 19:25:55 UTC
I'm glad you found the story entertaining ( ... )

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