I think this is really good! Hilarious, but good. I'm still picturing the vacant stares of the Melvinites when reading this though. You'll hand them a sheet, and they'll just stare at you, and stare and stare....do you have nightmares about their stares? Haha! Sorry. Ok, so I think this is a very good idea in the first place because old people do better with step-by-step directions, and I think the glossory is a stroke of genius (though you may want to put it in alphabetical order? it seems now it's in order of things being connected to each other, so maybe that actually works better? it's a judgement call i guess). I actually learned a bunch of stuff from this! Stuff I kind of already knew, but more on a subconscious level where that was just how things worked but I never really thought about them. Hmm. Anyway, the only suggestions I would have is maybe under the cursor definition to say how it can appear as a hand when on the internet (that's something that seemed to confuse the hell out of my mom for the longest time....wtf?). And a nitpicky proofreading suggestion, maybe adding "on" or "upon" in the second sentence at the top? But okay, on to the next!
I actually learned a bunch of stuff from this! Stuff I kind of already knew, but more on a subconscious level where that was just how things worked but I never really thought about them. Hmm. Anyway, the only suggestions I would have is maybe under the cursor definition to say how it can appear as a hand when on the internet (that's something that seemed to confuse the hell out of my mom for the longest time....wtf?). And a nitpicky proofreading suggestion, maybe adding "on" or "upon" in the second sentence at the top?
But okay, on to the next!
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