[POTC Holiday Fic] - KotS companion vignette - Myrrh for the King: Part Two - 3/3 - rated R

Jan 20, 2008 15:22



~Part Two~

The evening had passed colorfully enough. For his part, Jack had spent the better half of the hour before dinner fetching water for his bloody sister. And so he’d found himself making several trips to the well. He’d grumbled a good deal, but the lime juice that Sara had made with said water rendered the labor nearly worthwhile, the ( Read more... )

potc, kingdoms of the swan, fic, holiday

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fried_flamingo January 22 2008, 01:58:17 UTC
*pets the new username* Love the new handle. Very fabulous. :)

*twirls* Isn't it pretty? lol

I think it's the sort of thing one does when you have such deep feelings for someone - and when you're become accustomed to their presence - regardless of company and the kind of non-relationship that Jack and Lizzie are trying to pretend they have.

It's wonderful to see them like this and I think it just adds to the complexities of their relationship that they can be so intimate with each other, while still being reluctant to take it any further.

I'm so sorry it didn't work for you - and I hope it didn't throw you too much - but I am glad that you enjoyed the rest of the story. :)

I think this is the beauty of our little fandom here. We all have the scope to dig into the characters and see what treasure we find. A lot of us will find different aspects to explore, but Jack is such a rich tapestry that almost anything could be possible. I do love dark!Jack too and I think he definitely exists and this was a brave choice to make. Definitely interesting to read (and I have to admit a sort of perverse enjoyment of Jack being so crass with Elizabeth when mocking Will - it was pretty hot ;)) So while I'd say I wasn't convinced I could see Jack acting like this, it was still interesting to see you explore that.

Looking forward to more KotS :D

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