[team 1] Obedience

[omoikkiri]

Let's keep the miyatama pattern going then? (This is maybe not quite as fleshed out as it should be, but uh, idk, it wanted me to stop writing here, and who am I to argue with the words. v_v)

Comments

[miquilis]

Oh.

I want to take this miyatama drabble on a date, buy it flowers and dinner, romance it, go for a late evening stroll, hold hands maybe even kiss a little, wait anxiously for it to call or message the next day while planning our wedding I took this metaphor too far but I love it that much.

I would just really love there to be more miyatama following this style/theme.

[omoikkiri]

lol what. lol. lol some more. (I laughed a lot at this comment okay..)

[miquilis]

My feelings may have come on too strong but I really liked it.

Yes. This is still open in a tab.

[omoikkiri]

Oh but I love this comment! I love that you can even come up with comments like this ahaha ♥

[kira_shadow]

The first sentence. XD
A+

I like how this is written. Thoughtful, sort of serious and heavy in terms of mood. Seeing the world through Tama's eyes, being troubled and just being as he is.
And then things are resolved and all's well and ... waah~
._.

in love with your writing style! ♥

[omoikkiri]

Well I wasn't going to waste "come" on an ordinary sentence! Might as well take it all the way XD

Do I even have a style? I've always felt rather style-less lol ;;

[mousapelli]

omg this is so sweet and good and ekjglekjalajgldkjakdga. Usually i'm mad when things are short on here, but this is exactly perfect the way it is.

UGH MIYATAMA FEELINGS.

[omoikkiri]

XD um. It's funny how things turn out, I felt like it needed a bit more words, but I guess it's good the way it is? Anyway, thank you :D

[noella84]

Loved it ♥

[omoikkiri]

♥

[loveandcoffee]

wow, this was really good. I love the structure, how it's written, all that's understood yet so clear.

[omoikkiri]

Thanks! Glad you liked it :D