Star Trek XI -- "Not Your Average Pon Farr Story" -- Part 4 of 4

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The heat rushed into his mind, burning like a star.

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Comments

[lygtemanden]

Ohh God, Yes! What an interesting take on the trope. I really have a thing for insecure Kirk, and this fits very nicely!

Thank you for sharing this!

[melayneseahawk]

Thank you for reading!

[ariadnechan]

I really like this take of the trope!

i read a long time a go one where Jim went to riverside to die because of ponfarr and Spock enclose himself with him against jim's wishes.
very angsty one. Good but angsty.

but i really like this one. Because Spock hesitate a lot before he decides what to do his final leap of fate is when he is certain that no one can help him but him, and he really loves Jim and he didn't want to lose him.
Also jim experiencing Pon Farr like Spock is really awesome approach.
i really like this fic!

[melayneseahawk]

Thank you so much!

I remember that fic. It was good.

[karraparis]

NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's over! Well I say No! I demand more PLEASE!!!!!! Must have more!
I do love that fact that yes, Spock is reasuring Jim that he is wanted!

[melayneseahawk]

Thank you for reading!

[shatfat]

Wow, hearted for using the word "homeostasis". I like the twist on the oft-told tale.

[melayneseahawk]

It is Spock, after all. Thank you for reading!

[1_mad_squirrel]

Gorgeous!

[melayneseahawk]

Thank you!