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Stargate -- "Ab esse ad posse"

Feb 27, 2007 00:52

slash_100, prompt 091: Epiphany
big damn table

Also written for picfor1000, this image.

“You could do anything for as long as you want without having to worry about consequences, and you play golf?”

( Ab esse ad posse | Prompt 091: Epiphany | G | 1000 words )

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Comments 18

ceares February 27 2007, 11:17:48 UTC

Sweet and lovely.

melayneseahawk February 27 2007, 13:53:03 UTC

Thank you!

angiepen February 27 2007, 20:42:50 UTC

Owwy. :/ Nice lead-in and build-up to the "Oww!" climax and then "Maybe...?" wrap-up.

Angie, who just woke up and isn't feeling terribly expressive yet :P

melayneseahawk February 28 2007, 00:59:09 UTC

'S all good. Sleep is a wonderful thing.

green_grrl February 27 2007, 20:43:17 UTC

Squee! Oh, so hard to know, and have to wait.... *heart breaks around the tiny piece of hope*

melayneseahawk February 28 2007, 00:59:52 UTC

*helps gather pieces into a little pile* Sorry. Superglue?

sidlj February 27 2007, 22:35:10 UTC

I believe Jack owes Daniel a kiss that he can remember. Something for the long, cold nights ahead. They've already GOT the consequences, so where's the kiss, huh? Huh? *pouts*

:-D

melayneseahawk February 28 2007, 01:00:57 UTC

Heh, not enough words to play with. And it's more heartbreaking this way, I think. I was aiming for bittersweet.

starglyph February 27 2007, 23:02:30 UTC

Jack didn’t say, but Daniel knew.
Jack smiled carefully, and Daniel knew it would be worth the wait.

So sweet, so good and so them! I love fic where they know, and they dance, and they wait for each other.

melayneseahawk February 28 2007, 01:01:51 UTC

Somehow, the picture just begged for it. I'm so glad it worked.