Comments | writers_ball: Spin the Bottle

zombie_bandido in writers_ball

Spin the Bottle

Feb 18, 2010 16:02

Challenge Name: Your POV
Title: Spin the Bottle
Rating: Um... PG-13 for kissing and cursing and drinking?
Word Count (optional): 375
Author's Notes (optional): It feels WEIRD to post after not posting for so long. Anyways. Cian is pronounced "key-in", and the MC's name is Siothrún (pronounced Shah-rune). I'm sort of on a Gaelic name kick... they' ( Read more... )

author: zombie_bandido, challenge sixteen: your pov

Comments 9

not_quite_queen February 19 2010, 00:52:44 UTC

I love it. The emotion is displayed beautifully. ^_^

zombie_bandido February 19 2010, 01:20:12 UTC

*___* Thank you...

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zombie_bandido February 25 2010, 12:24:00 UTC

Aww, thank you so much!

deadcharlie February 25 2010, 21:49:55 UTC

Really liked it even though I tend to prefer stories in third person : P ..So that's a big compliment! ^^
You're really able feel the emotions that the main characther is struggling with and see the whole scenario before you despite that the surroundings isn't descriped that detail..
I hope for a sequel.

I'll stalk you :3

zombie_bandido February 25 2010, 22:06:58 UTC

*___*
Th-thank you! I'm so flattered... I don't really know what to say...

Btw. Your avi is SOOO adorable!

ashrayne February 28 2010, 14:56:40 UTC

This made me giggle, and I loved it! The twist in the middle of the story completely caught me off guard, but the way you painted the scene was just perfect.

The last line was perfect :)

zombie_bandido February 28 2010, 17:43:10 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it XD

not_quite_queen March 28 2010, 01:14:28 UTC

Could I use this for the Unwritten challenge?? Pwease?

zombie_bandido March 28 2010, 04:17:50 UTC

:D I AM SO FLATTERED YES!!! I can't wait to see what you do with it >W