Comments | writerone_96: Dark Before the Dawn prt 2/??

writerone_96

Dark Before the Dawn prt 2/??

Jul 22, 2006 01:27

Chapter 1The streets were amazingly busy for this time of the day. Usually, like in all peaceful little areas, there would be a few people walking the streets. Bam noticed though that very few to no people were walking the streets. Those that were out seemed in a hurry to pack their bags into their cars and to get out as quickly as they could. ( Read more... )

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spike4eternity July 22 2006, 06:35:42 UTC

(claps) excellent so far, hon! Love it! The detail is great, not too much, not too little. Can't wait for the next part...still buggered curious about what Chad was fighting for possession of with Jess's kid over though.. hehe

amaroqwolf_inc July 22 2006, 06:39:04 UTC

Arn't we all deary, maybe we can figure it out later cause I sure as hell don't know yet, I just know its important!!!

sweet_666_777 July 22 2006, 06:47:41 UTC

“Holy fuck!” Chad yelped backing up. “Leaving now!” he said, heading for the stairs.

I dunno but for some reason that line made me giggle just a little bit...could be because I'm not quite sane...I dunno.

amaroqwolf_inc July 22 2006, 06:49:02 UTC

Hehehe, but I love you anyways Wifey number 2 LMAO!!

sweet_666_777 July 22 2006, 06:52:12 UTC

Hehe...what other woman (besides Fizzy and myself of course) can say she has two wifeys. Thanks for loving me even though I'm a very odd insane person. :D

amaroqwolf_inc July 22 2006, 08:04:39 UTC

Eh heh! Im just as ODD I came up with THIS! THIS I TELL YOU!

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dyingforyourluv July 22 2006, 06:47:46 UTC

Oh my god, please tell me this is about zombies. I would love you forever.

...and even if it's not, well, I like the way it's going anyway. Keep up the good work!

amaroqwolf_inc July 22 2006, 06:49:38 UTC

:-D Read the next chapter and find out, give me like till tuesday on that one cause after tommarow I'm off to visit family. YAY!!

dyingforyourluv July 22 2006, 07:39:00 UTC

Ooooh, now you've got me all excited...

amaroqwolf_inc July 22 2006, 08:03:14 UTC

I love your Icon....(stares)

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amaroqwolf_inc July 22 2006, 06:50:42 UTC

I LOVE THAT MOVIE! Both old and new versions...(nods and giggels) More soon.

vodka2tharescue July 22 2006, 07:02:20 UTC

*gasp* Oooooooh noooooooez! This is like....gonna be scary, huh? I can tell! And and and...all I can think is..."Ruuuuuuuun boys ruuuuunnnnnn!"

Great job darling....as always! *hugs*

amaroqwolf_inc July 22 2006, 07:07:49 UTC

Thankies my popsicle lady...you dirty dirty popsical lady you! (points Cherry Popsical and smirks)

vodka2tharescue July 22 2006, 07:13:24 UTC

*grins* You know...its not nice to tease! Because your popsicle is melting...and its tempting to lick! Especially on hot days like these!

amaroqwolf_inc July 22 2006, 07:17:28 UTC

Indeed, but I love Cherry its sooo yummy and sweet and red and FUCK ME I'm Writing it! (runs off to write) Well I'll do it on the car trip probably.

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