Is what i write right?

[suzan_o_no]

hey  i just joined this community, i have always had a thing for writing, just seem to find it relaxing, a way to express myself like most do i guess. i'm still in high school. i don't have a degree in English or anything its just something i like to do when i have time. I'm gonna post some things i've written when i got time, i loved for you guys to check 'em out and let me know what you think. criticism welcome. :D

thanks;