Pride 2/2

[write_my_dreams]

Title: Pride
Author: write_my_dreams
Pairing: Hints of one-sided Gackt x Hyde
Genre: AU, crime, action
Warning/Disclaimer: Contains some violence. All J-Rockers own themselves, I just own the crazy people in this story.
Rating: PG-13
Chapters: 2/2 (So long I have to split it into two parts)
Summary: Hyde hates how everyone is out to protect him and wants to prove that

Comments

[eadwine63]

oh god I liked this. I liked the action, the friendship between Hyde and Asagi, the fact Gackt is their boss and has a thing for Hyde. I like your writing anyway, but I seriously liked this. xD
it seems so .. different than normal for some reason I can't pinpoint... xD

[write_my_dreams]

Yay! I figured Gackt would be perfect as their perverted boss and while I'm not interested in writing more GxH I wanted to add in a slight hint of romance. And after all, any Gackt must have a thing for Hyde! Thank you :D I think it's different too because it's about things I don't usually write with fanfiction. Action scenes, crime... focused more on friends than a couple.

Now I want to write more XD

[eadwine63]

Do so please, I enjoyed it very much. ^_^
and on your other comment: having fun writing it is what counts!! although obviously comments make it even better. xD

more people should read this, though. They don't know what they're missing!!

[write_my_dreams]

I've started writing a little more
Yeah, and it was a good challenge to write a fic like this. Lol yes comments make everything better XD

We'll see if they do

[a_deux_vitesses]

Poor Hyde, the beating he took was horrible :( I like how Hyde wearing a dress in his dream is linked to the fact that Hyde feels like a damsel in distress because everyone protects him. Sometimes it's good to speak out; people can't know something's bothering you, or the reasons behind your feelings if you don't say anything. My desire to have some understanding, some help was already starting to get bigger, and Hyde confessing in this made it even more so

He didn’t think anyone would listen or worse, they would think he was just whining and being annoying.This is a big part of why I don't say anything; my problem is something everyone just deals with and so I worry they'll see me as just making a big fuss out of nothing... My mom and cousin thought that when I first told them. Ahem, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to make this about me, it's just this really resonated with me

[write_my_dreams]

It really was :( Poor thing. Yeah and the connection with his broken ribs. It is, I just hate doing doing so and prefer not to bother. I'm not sure if Hyde was helping you or not in that case :/

It's part of why I don't say anything either. I put some of myself into this particular Hyde. I feel like that's what a lot of people do and that's why I stopped opening up to people years ago. Why bother pouring my heart out when they won't listen/care/accept my problem? It's fine

Gackt knows how to make Hyde feel better

From the vague parts I remember of my dream, it was intense. So I tried to make it like that in my story. It is... he's lucky he's staying with Asagi. He'll have a kitty to cuddle with when he gets really stressed. Hyde did learn his lesson and as long as they don't get overprotective he can handle them looking out for him.

Thank you! Lol yeah, now it's just a matter of which one I want to write first once I have all the ideas down

[a_deux_vitesses]

Oh yeah, with the corset. I understand. Eh, a little of both, but more help I think

I can see that now that you mention it. I completely sympathize with you on that, as you already know, and really, once you get into that mindset, it's so hard to even attempt it again...

Well, you did a great job! That's true~ Ok, that's good then.

Haha ok :)

[write_my_dreams]

Yeah, poor Hyde. I guess that's good then

Sometimes some of myself goes into the characters I write. It definitely is...

Thank you :) And snuggling with a purring kitty is always relaxing. They'll just have to learn to back off a little

But I have to work on Breaking first

[write_my_dreams]

7th Rose icons!

Thank you :)
Oh good, I was really worried that they were going to be bad.
Poor Hyde indeed :( I blame my violent mind.
Haha I never bothered to think of a deeper story for her since Hyde takes care of her quickly enough. Gackt will definitely try to investigate where she came from since she tried to kill Hyde... and Asagi will help when he's not being mommy to Hyde.
I wanted to have some light-hearted moments like that in there to break up the drama XD